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SylvereApLeanan -> RE: Is there a Mistress out there who might be interested in me (1/2/2010 7:03:05 PM)
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~FR~
Well, your profile is rather short and doesn't really talk about the type of relationship you want. It's good that you mention some vanilla interests such as exercising, but without mentioning any other hobbies it comes across as narcissistic. It's also good you mention wanting to make life easier for a dominant woman by doing chores or giving her a pedicure, but overall, the glaring errors in spelling, grammar, and lack of punctuation in your profile and your OP are a turn-off. They signify you are either lazy enough not to bother checking these simple things or you lack the education to recognize your errors. For a man approaching 40, this doesn't bode well. I suggest expanding your profile to add things like your favorite types of music and movies, what type of relationship you want (casual play, live-in, etc.), and clean up your spelling and grammar.
In addition, the photo you've used as your primary makes you look like you're trying to imitate Tom Cruise. The sunglasses and exposed tattoos gives the impression you're immature for your age. While there's nothing wrong with tattoos, I suggest you rearrange your photos so the one of you in the long-sleeved shirt is first. It shows you well-dressed but not too formal and it's a good face photo.
You also need to kill the negativity (no time wasters, only contact me if you're serious, etc.) and focus on positive things. Make sure you're reading profiles, that you match what the woman in question is looking for, and that you give some indication that you've done so in your introductory email. This can be as simple as "Hi, I noticed you like coffee shops (or any other vanilla interest) and wanted to know what you thought about [insert related topic here]." Let the conversation evolve from there.
*Edited for typos. See how that works?
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