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In the Darkening of the Night. - 1/4/2010 7:11:43 PM   
tayled22


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In the Darkening of the Night.     Glimmers and glimpses are all I get.   I feel the submission deep within   Begging for release.   Trying hard not to succumb   The yearnings only grow with time.   The dreams and fantasies I create   The things I do no longer give any respite.   In the darkening of the night.       I feel my toes grip upon the edge.   The void calls to me,   Beckons from the depths   The crying grows louder and louder   In the darkening of the night.       How does a girl fill the feelings?   Feelings keeping her awake   They say that patience is a virtue   A hollow virtue at best now   In the darkening of the night       Where is the balance?   That harmony?   A girl feels these things when she serves    When she gives of her heart and mind.   This girl feels the craving, the need.   In the darkening of the night.       Where is the man that would fill this emptiness?   Where is the man that would bring balance to this girl’s life?   Where is the man that would feel the harmony with her?   Where is the man that would guide her, teach her?   Where is the man that would help her grow as his?   In the darkness of night.       Brings only want and desire.   There are only sighs of longing,   There needs to be trust   There needs to be respect   There needs to be deep control.   Needs are submission and surrender   How can they be filled alone?   In the darkness of night.

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RE: In the Darkening of the Night. - 3/2/2010 10:59:18 AM   
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very thought provoking writing, I enjoyed this very  much, it seems to make my mind wander, I suppose we all wonder of things such as these...

Jezzy

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