sunshinemiss
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ORIGINAL: tosted I recently discovered that there are a cum load of fake profiles (Join these two. They are two clauses of the same sentence) mainly from other countries. (TWO, not one, spaces after the end of a sentence.) I have learned that they say they're from the U.S. when they're not. (Capitalize beginnings of sentences, please). If you think that is bad, (comma required - if clause) check this out (Interjections will often have an exclamation point. In this case, a period is fine. However, you did forget to end the sentence. You have a run on sentence.). Some say they're female when they are men. I also should add (it would be better if you added the word "that" - not NECESSARY, but it would flow better) they're using a translator very poorly. Look for words that are out of place. You mean like "manly" instead of mainly or "there" instead of they're? I tried to stop myself. I swear I did. Poor grammar is a sign of using a translator very poorly as you have noted above. Thank you for the chuckle. I miss the old Ultimate Collar Me Question, don't you?
< Message edited by sunshinemiss -- 1/5/2010 3:30:17 PM >
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