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Before i sleep - 2/9/2010 1:41:42 PM

playfulpest

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Before i sleep my mind does seek the answers to my questions
The visions of the day just past have left your slave in a quandary
To know that i must linger not upon that which is not for me to worry
It is my Master’s mind for which i need to still my fears as the daemons fill my ears
As I, my head do lay to rest my eyes i close so the day i may arrest
With the song of soft winds wafting the Angels bring my dreams
Upon my lips i whisper beseeching please come to me protect me still for the world can be so frightening
For Master of mine your slave does need to comfort of your teachings
Slave begs to block the visions which come unbidden they beat my mind they cut my heart
With the flow from which these wounds do seep, my tears run unnoticed
There is but one a man so good my Guardian in my darkness
He stills these fear and break the mould cast upon the years
To call within and hear without to know that if i shout He will come to beat them back
To lay alone within the coldness darkening to tremor at the sounds of laughing
To lay in wait within an almost dream state and feel His presence beside me
To lift my eyes and whisper soft Your slave she was so frightened
I can stand my ground might even hold my head up proud for i know this Man He owns me
So before i sleep i count my blessings i am His and He is mine way out into eternity

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RE: Before i sleep - 3/9/2010 3:58:02 PM

jezzybelle

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There is a lot of good imagery in this, just reads a bit off to me, BUT I like it....really like it...

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"Come to the edge," He said.
she said, " I am afraid".
"'Come to the edge", He said.
she came...He pushed her...
And They flew.....

(in reply to playfulpest)

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