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xXone4kneelingXx -> i stare (3/3/2010 6:21:02 PM)

i stare in amazement at what i see, i wonder in my heart could this really be.



i stare at a Dominant walking by, i wonder would He ever make me cry.



i stare in envy of the sub i see, how does she seem so fulfilled, so free...



i stare in loathing thinking "who the hell is she", i cry in sorrow wondering why its not me.



i stare in lust of what she's got, when all i hear in "no" and "not".



i stare at this whore, this cunt, this slut, But all i see is her fine ass butt.



i stare in sorrow as she kneels there, giving herself without a care.



i'm mad i'm pissed but still i stare, what right has she, how does she dare.



As i look once more i begin to see, It's only a mirror and the sub is me........




candisa -> RE: i stare (3/5/2010 3:15:04 PM)

I like the self-reflection.
Thanks for sharing, and
welcome to the forums




jezzybelle -> RE: i stare (3/5/2010 5:51:00 PM)

I like the perspective of you seeing yourself, enjoyed it very much... good piece of writing

well done
jezzybelle




xXone4kneelingXx -> RE: i stare (3/5/2010 6:39:55 PM)

thank you both this is the very first thing i have eer written and it came straight from my heart.




tarnishdhaylo -> RE: i stare (3/5/2010 6:43:43 PM)

I enjoyed reading it very much , thank you for sharing




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