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Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 7:42:49 PM

luckysub99

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Hello to all, I would like to know if my profile is one that would peak any Mistress to possibly take a chance on me?? Or is it to vanilla or am I too picky?Honest answers and please dont bash me too much...THANK YOU

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 7:44:56 PM

LadyAngelika

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Insert a few paragraph breaks and put a more contrasting background and then when I have a moment I'll read it and give you my opinion.

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 7:48:31 PM

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Read this.

http://www.collarchat.com/m_3057123/tm.htm

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 7:51:12 PM

MzticStormz

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I have to agree with LadyAngelika, currently your profile is very difficult to read, firstly because you have no spaces seperating the paragraphs, and the black and green tend to bleed together also. I think I would get a headache if I were to try to read it as it is right now.

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 7:52:38 PM

LadyAngelika

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Those are good tips RedMagic1. I actually like this resource for writing the profile itself: http://www.singleguyadvisor.com/online-dating-advice.html

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 7:55:57 PM

Lockit

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Besides the paragraphs, please re-read it and put in the missing words or the correct word, as at times I can't understand what you are saying without trying to figure it out. You will lose half your readers right there. It makes one think you may talk like that and the last thing I want is to decipher what someone is trying to say.

It's good to put in facts about yourself or your life, but you don't need to assume or point out that people might have a problem with what you are saying. I think we all do that at some time, but it can be a drawback. So rather than say something to the effect that if someone has a problem with you having a teenage child, you could say you have a teen who you love and care for and would need someone to be okay with that. Half the time I wasn't sure if you were happy with it or not because of the facts you put around it.

Try reading the FAQ on the top of the mistress board.

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 8:08:54 PM

luckysub99

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Thank you so much you all have been very helpful and yes I will fix all that after work... I really value all the suggestions..THANKS

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/15/2010 8:15:59 PM

Voodali

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While I would agree that your profile does ramble a bit, I think its already a cut above many in that you lay everything out on the table from the start (at least it seems so). For the most part you demonstrate humility and a lack of homophobia...always good traits in my book, and the reader gets a sense of who you are. While yours is not an arrangement I could live with, I like to think there is someone right for you who can, and I sincerely wish you luck.

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RE: Is my post acceptable?? - 3/16/2010 7:53:55 AM

Lucienne

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I assume you pulled the profile text for editing. I will ask about the photo - do you live in your mother's basement?

Also, the journal entry was nice. I'd bet you're better off doing non-kinky journal entries that give a sense of who you are as a person rather than feeling restricted to kinky topics.

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