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auditguy -> First Story: Her True self (4/4/2010 11:21:06 AM)
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Have been working on a first story, which is less a story and more a kind of an amalgamation of different fantasies that I have had swirling in my head all jumbled into one pretty sick story (not sick in a good way), it would probably be more of a stroke story since the plot is weak, to put it gently. I probably should put it into the uncreative writing section of the message boards, but alas it does not exist. Still thought I'd put it up here get some feedback and comments, I mean now that I have over criticized it myself.
There is actually a fourth part coming, but I have been real busy at work and it might take a little while until I get around to it. I was also going to probably re-edit the whole story after I finish it up, just so that I get ideas down on some server somewhere, so I don't forget them all (I know…I know some of you will probably wish I did forget it), but like the fourth chapter it might take a while. Plus I am a horrible editor, so I might need to look for one to make the story more readable and enjoyable for everyone.
Now for the links to the stories (enjoy):
Note - Literotica is the better one of the two from the authors perspective and the layout, but the Storiesonline one has a better search engine if you want to wash your mind of the bad taste of my story, although I do put up recommendations for my favorite stories, from other, much better authors on both sites; I am going to add to those lists overtime.
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1160917&page=submissions
http://storiesonline.net/auth/Auditguy
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