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SweetNika -> Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 11:58:45 AM)

I have rewritten my profile and would love some constructive criticizime on it please.



VirginPotty -> RE: Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 12:23:48 PM)

It's fine, Nika but you might want to remove the journal entries that include your move w/NM.



SweetNika -> RE: Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 12:36:28 PM)

I didn't even think about that, i may just update my journal instead of deleting the enteries.



pegbundy -> RE: Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 12:43:14 PM)

I couldn't find anything to criticize. Sorry I'm no help.



VirginPotty -> RE: Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 12:49:40 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: SweetNika

I didn't even think about that, i may just update my journal instead of deleting the enteries.


Start fresh....delete anything that mentions him including the dates.
Your new life begins TODAY! Start a fresh entry! 



darkclouds -> RE: Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 12:54:30 PM)

Nah, leave em up there. Let people see what kind of person you are.



VaguelyCurious -> RE: Adice on my profile pls! (5/14/2010 1:18:45 PM)

It's a good profile-clear and descriptive. [:)]

There are a couple of minor (teeeeeny tiny really not that important) grammatical errors, mainly to do with comma placement-not worth listing them on the forums, but if you want a fix memo me.

VC the grammar fanatic



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