RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (Full Version)

All Forums >> [Community Discussions] >> General BDSM Discussion



Message

MHOO314 -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 1:12:18 PM)

<smiles> we do try, just not on the full of the moon, the waning moon, the new moon, the moon in the middle, 12th night....
 
teasing people--Welcome to the Boards Chsnutmare--your flame proof suit will arrive satisfaction guaranteed in 2 weeks or your money back.
 
[image]http://www.collarchat.com/micons/m25.gif[/image]



MadamShy -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 1:17:55 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: MsSophie

Give the girl a break! She may not be the next Nobel Prize winner, but it shows some guts to post a poem on a site like this, knowing that you risk people giving negative chritique on something as heartfelt as poetry. Not terribly strange if you later on try to back out of it with your pride intact.

Personally I have read many far worse pieces, some of them from published authors.


TOO be honest once I found out she was underage I got worried about such a poem My daughter grew up in the lifestyle and was NOT that aware at 17 with such intense feelings...


and remember it wasn't the girl that posted ... it was a tutor .. now wondering what this tutor is tutoring in....




Cloudz -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 1:43:13 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: MHOO314

quote:

ORIGINAL: slo18

I said tutor, not teacher. meaning she goes to class and comes home and I help her with her homework.   I did not tell her I posted it on an adults only bdsm site. I asked her if I could share the poem,  and she said share it with who ever I wanted  as long as she go to hear if  anyone liked.   the desicion to post it where ever I decide to post it  is not poor judgment, your assumption that I told this child where I posted it was a incorect.     I will tell her that it got mixed reviews and to look up the word silvan.  and to spell cheak.  thank u for the advice to pass along.


You are a tutor, still seen as a mentor, guide, you posted something from a minor on an adult website---IMHO you don't have the right to post it anywhere you please when you cross over the sense of decency and respect for privacy--you would IMHO been better served to send it in email to your friends rather than expose the work to a site like this.  I can assure you that that work has by now been replicated, changed, stolen and who knows what else..what will she say when someone finds it on this site and asks her about it? I'm sorry I stick with bad judgement.


Bad judgement...she is 17? Let her find her own places to post...this raises red flags for me...



MsSophie -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 2:13:56 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: MadamShy
TOO be honest once I found out she was underage I got worried about such a poem My daughter grew up in the lifestyle and was NOT that aware at 17 with such intense feelings...

and remember it wasn't the girl that posted ... it was a tutor .. now wondering what this tutor is tutoring in....


Sounds to me as if the excuse of it being the work of a 17 year old is just that, a way of directing the fire at an unknown recipient rather than having to take them.
If it isn't? Well, I'm not actually concerned about a 17 year old writing this kind of poem. Frankly, I could easilly have written something far more descriptive and erotic at that age - and I didn't even take a lover til far later in my life.

What she is describing is, after all, something fairly mild. Some light bondage and possibly a bit of spanking, but what really shines through is the love. Isn't that what we all dream of?

I didn't grow up in any kind of alternative lifestyle, if you don't count solid middle class alternative, and one of my biggest regrets is that it took me so long time to find words depicting my feelings and desires. If there is a young person who has found the words I congratulate her.

What would concern me, if anything, is if the poster posted someone elses words without explicit consent.

I have little knowledge of what the age of consent is in Kansas, where the poster claims to live. Where I live it's 15, but fantasies and dreams know no age-boundaries, and rightly so.



AngelaK -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 3:37:00 PM)

Hello? Anyone else curious about the question?? Does he stay or go? Thought this was written by a 17 yo girl and posted for the sake of feedback. The whole thing smells fishy to me.



SirKenin -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 4:32:35 PM)

I do not think it shows any guts at all to post her own work and then pretend it is a student's.  That is absolutely spineless.  The spelling mistakes.  The topic.  The fact that it would have to take a complete idiot to post someone other minor's work on an adult website and pretend that this minor is a BDSM diehard.  I doubt this lady is an idiot.  Just spineless and not overly bright.

I find it disgusting actually.



SirKenin -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 4:34:48 PM)

By the way, the poem really is not good, which is probably why she is hiding behind a 17 year old....  And what kind of 17 year old that is half way balanced writes BDSM specific, graphic "poetry".

*barf*

The "does he go" refers to her Dom.  I will bet My last dollar on it.  She is trying to find out from us if her Dom is going to dump her.  To save us all from the gag reflex she should have just come right out and asked.  I would have respected her a whole lot more.

If I am wrong, well, that is the way it goes I suppose.



AngelaK -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 4:37:30 PM)

Does he stay or go? Wouldn't it seem the original intent was to pass this off as written to her as a present, as a gift of submission and now she's asking us if she should keep him or not? Sheesh? Pitiful.

I think she wrote it and was trying to pass it off as something else then changed horses mid stream.



PrinceSitri -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 4:40:41 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: SirKenin

By the way, the poem really is not good

As an ex-teacher you can believe me when I say I've endured much, much worse in the name of education.



SirKenin -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 4:42:17 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: PrinceSitri

quote:

ORIGINAL: SirKenin

By the way, the poem really is not good

As an ex-teacher you can believe me when I say I've endured much, much worse in the name of education.



My father is a retired teacher as well.  26 years teaching physics and math.  He can probably relate quite well to your experiences, and I can certainly appreciate them Myself.



wytchywoman -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 4:43:27 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: AngelaK

Does he stay or go? Wouldn't it seem the original intent was to pass this off as written to her as a present, as a gift of submission and now she's asking us if she should keep him or not? Sheesh? Pitiful.

I think she wrote it and was trying to pass it off as something else then changed horses mid stream.


-Nods- My thoughts real early on. A lot of us have now suggested that she wrote it herself and then tried to pass it off as something a 17 year old wrote. That's pretty sleazy. If it really was actually written by a 17 year old that she's "tutoring", then it was in very poor taste for her to post it on an adult site. It it is indeed (as most of suspect) her own work, she should have let the bad reviews go instead of coming back and making up a story to explain it away.

She's playing to a tough crowd here. [;)]



stickywhicket -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 5:50:39 PM)

I liked it.
It was reeking of "newbeeness",it was fresh... and I felt she was saying she was afraid her Dom would leave her.That she wasnt good enough.I think we have all felt that.We certainly all NEED to feel that ..at least once or twice.LOL.
Period.



KatyLied -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 6:37:54 PM)

quote:

Does he stay or go?


I don't care what he does.  As long as he buys her a dictionary.



PrinceSitri -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/12/2006 6:51:17 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: SirKenin

quote:

ORIGINAL: PrinceSitri

quote:

ORIGINAL: SirKenin

By the way, the poem really is not good

As an ex-teacher you can believe me when I say I've endured much, much worse in the name of education.



My father is a retired teacher as well.  26 years teaching physics and math.  He can probably relate quite well to your experiences, and I can certainly appreciate them Myself.

Don't get me started. Sisyphus had an easy gig in comparison!



FelinePersuasion -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/13/2006 12:07:05 AM)

wohoo:)



FelinePersuasion -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/13/2006 12:11:51 AM)

you need to spell check your stuff as well Every post you make has at least 3 or four obvious mistakes.
quote:

ORIGINAL: slo18

I said tutor, not teacher. meaning she goes to class and comes home and I help her with her homework.   I did not tell her I posted it on an adults only bdsm site. I asked her if I could share the poem,  and she said share it with who ever I wanted  as long as she go to hear if  anyone liked.   the desicion to post it where ever I decide to post it  is not poor judgment, your assumption that I told this child where I posted it was a incorect.     I will tell her that it got mixed reviews and to look up the word silvan.  and to spell cheak.  thank u for the advice to pass along.



NeedToUseYou -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/13/2006 12:29:44 AM)

I'm inspired to write a poem as well. hehe

My heart is stone
My cock is firm
My touch  alone
will only confirm

Your will is mine
and mine alone
Not to confine
From this you've Grown
Like the knife
pulled from the wound
Pain is life
and life is with you.

Now, if you like it. then I wrote it.

If you thought it was okay, I wrote it when tired.

If you thought it was bad, my brother wrote it.

If you thought it was really bad, my kid sister wrote it.

If you thought it was the worse thing you've ever read, Then my 5 year old nephew wrote it while popping uppers and he's mentally retarded, so it's good for him right.

Hehe, I'm not much for poetry.







MHOO314 -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/13/2006 4:21:58 AM)

Actually NeedToUseYou--it wasn't too bad, You may have a new career here----lol



NeedToUseYou -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/13/2006 4:28:23 AM)

yeah, I wrote it while I was tired. LOL



DarkSideOfThMoon -> RE: something I thought u would enjoy. and a Q (4/13/2006 4:37:40 AM)

Giggles at NeedToUseYou, is better then this story, which is actually published... [:o]

http://www.pennine-publishing.com/swingers_lovers.htm



Page: <<   < prev  1 [2] 3   next >   >>

Valid CSS!




Collarchat.com © 2025
Terms of Service Privacy Policy Spam Policy
0.03125