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Enthralled.. a poem - 7/4/2010 12:04:09 PM   
loveydovey


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Throbbing pain between my thighs, Without it I'd be hard to recognize. Burning clit and swollen lips, Red slashes around my hips. The marks He leaves upon my flesh, Some are old, and some are fresh. Never being without His marks, Flames soaring higher, creating sparks. Only with Him am I whole, He owns my mind, my body, heart and soul.

My breasts all sore and tender, With Him it is utter and pure surrender. It is only He that can give me the pain Without it , I'm afraid I'll be insane, The sweetest pain that I treasure. The exquisite torture without measure My pain, my pleasure, I have fallen, On my knees, through the haze, hearing Him calling Enchanted… captivated…under His spell, under His power, Accepting nothing less, He takes more of me with every passing hour.

Slashes of red burning bright, He marks my skin, as it is His right. A lovers touch, a Master's look The kiss of the lash as my body shook. My cunt is slick smooth and bare, Pulsating with hunger and need, everywhere. Lips all swollen and bruised, For Him alone I am to be used. I am His baby, His pet, His whore, I can not ever want for more, except of course, always more…

To please Him is all I want and need, He will always hear me beseech and plead. Begging to be touched, kissed, loved and fucked, He has me enthralled, bewitched, utterly awestruck. Legs spread wide, begging to be used as the slut that I am, Aching, wanting, needing His cock thrusting into me like a battering ram.

Craving passion, lusting for the pain, Knowing that I am His, and I'll never be the same. Feeling His touch, hearing His whispered words, Under His ownership I am cured. His love for me honest and true, completely real, I worry though… does He know how I feel? Will He know that my submission is true? When He looks in my eyes of shimmering green, I love You my Master and belong to You.

The whimpering cries that fill the day and night, Promising always to do things right. For Him and only Him, My love is strong and will never dim.

Begging and pleading to be allowed to fly, To know under His spell I can touch the sky. Fluttering up higher and higher, twisting flesh in a spin, Breathlessly poised on the peak waiting to begin. Soaring up higher lost in the clouds, Waiting for my orgasm to be allowed. Needing to hear the words from Him, I'm on the edge, nearly over the brim.

Fingers dancing in my cunt, Words are issued as a grunt. Body quivering, shaking out of control Falling into sweet abyss lost within that dark black hole. Knowing He'll be there to comfort and console, To pamper, to hold….to catch me when I reach the ground, No better Master can be found. I am mesmerized, hypnotized, totally spellbound.

Focussing only on His voice, His words, Begging and pleading, making myself heard, Please, please Master; let Your slut explode, I need to taste the salty sweetness of Your load.

Quivering wildly, out of my mind, Wanting and needing to have Him take me from behind. Needing to feel His cock buried deep, Knowing I'm His for now and for keeps. When we are joined as O/one I know that is when I finally come undone.

Totally possessed... Utterly free… Completely owned, Slut for Him… Slave to One.
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RE: Enthralled.. a poem - 7/4/2010 2:27:54 PM   
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Smoke um if you got um,

I need a cigerette.

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RE: Enthralled.. a poem - 7/6/2010 7:22:25 AM   
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That was truly beautiful ! my only change would to have it read "her" touch.  Thank you for sharing.

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RE: Enthralled.. a poem - 8/21/2010 9:46:36 PM   
MistressArletta


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That's interesting and full of all sorts of emotion, but, it's not a poem. It's a story that rhymes. There is a difference. Watch the movie 'Running with Scissors' The woman was a nut, but, she understood poetry.

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