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Abstracts -> Some of my Poetry (7/10/2010 4:30:32 PM)

This is some poetry written by Tobias, the male half of this profile. More to come later, I suppose.

Gaia

I have dreamed a dream that should not be dreamed

A rich and fertile land with soft rolling hills

A hidden stream of nectar from beneath dark underbrush

Silk caresses my lips as I gaze up at a rising sun above soft rolling hills

I take supple earth into my hands, warm and ripe

The sun rises higher as I search and reach for the nectar

The flowing stream of nectar from forbidden dreams

Finally at the climax of day, the nectar slides along my tongue

And a bright sun hines between rolling hills



I rise up o let my lips touch the heat of that sun

And I drive into the earth

The moist caverns nourish my roots and I grow

The drumbeat calling of my name takes me higher

Nourishing and driving deeper over those rolling hills

Night falls and I stare into starlight eyes

Finally, I howl to the moon in my rhythic midnight climax

As I float back from the dream I remember her

Her nourishing earth, both forbidden and fruitful

Fertile, supple, soft, wet, sunrise and rolling hills

I have dreamed the forbidden dream....




RedBottomGirl26 -> RE: Some of my Poetry (9/18/2010 10:58:59 PM)

Interesting analogy, and imagery. I like all the nature references trapped between the sensual elements. Good job. Keep up the good work. I like the analogy of the drum/wolf. I think we have all dreamed things like this at some point, though you seem to capture it well in words/and moving pictures.




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