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macs -> Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 1:09:51 AM)

Hello, I hope your having a good day I'm just looking for feedback on my profile, how it reads, what's missing, what needs taking out, changing whatever, just give me your honest opinion weather it's good or bad. Thanks in advance Macs.[:)]



DarkSteven -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 4:07:52 AM)

Well, the first thing is that I would remove the pics of other women.  If they're exes of yours, it's rude to use them without their consent.  If they're off the Internet, then your Warning at the end looks silly.  (It's pretty silly anyway.  Why on earth would anyone use a pic off your profile when there are trillions of pics online, and why should you care if they do?)

Aside from that, it's pretty good.



myotherself -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 5:20:31 AM)

I'm with Steven on the pics thing. If I see a profile with lots of other ladies on it, I assume that: (a) they've had a LOT of women, so aren't really looking for anything more than a fling, or (b) they're looking for someone just like the girls in the pic, and my ass isn't that good so he won't be interested in me...[:@]

The rest is fine (although the warning at the end always makes me roll my eyes, lol) - it puts across your personality and seems very honest. I'm not the kind who wants reams and reams of flowery prose about the joy/beauty/gift of submission, or any dark 'n dirty descriptions of sexual acts...so yours would be the kind of thing I'd look for.

Good luck with your search! [:D]



Jeffff -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 6:02:23 AM)

You don't like flowery prose?

Down the trail comes a bunny
In the twilite gloom.
Down the trail comes a bunny
As the evening looms.

He nose it twitchs
Her fur it itches
From pellets and fleas and spooge.



myotherself -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 6:18:29 AM)

spooge ain't itchy - you should know that, with you having a furry ass and all....[8|]



Jeffff -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 6:20:45 AM)

I do not get spooge on my fur!

I just kinda figured it would get all crusty and itchy.



divi -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 6:24:31 AM)

I dig it .. I have to agree about the pics of other chicks.  Also, was a lil long for my taste.  I like short and sweet. ( like me )



CeriseNin -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 6:57:58 AM)

Overall, I think it's a good profile, but agree with the others about the pics.



BonesFromAsh -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 7:20:06 AM)


-I would cut out the part about bdsm interests and instead fill out the checklist provided. If there's something not listed, maybe briefly mention in if it's that important to you.

-Lose the blip at the end about not using your photos. You have photos posted that aren't of you (random women)...do you have their permission? The artwork you have posted...is it yours? Do you have permission to post it if it isn't? If it is yours, state that in your profile.
Telling people to not use your photo and then turning around and posting photos/artwork that isn't you/yours is hypocritical.
You mention you like to travel...maybe you could substitute some shots taken while on vacation for the random female/artwork.

-Given your recent thread about not calling a woman a girl...you do that fairly often in your profile. A bit confusing.

Other than those points, it's just okay...nothing outstanding that would draw my attention but I tend to be picky about what appeals to me.






Jeffff -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 8:09:56 AM)

Oops



sexyred1 -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 8:50:04 AM)

Well aside from all the chick pics, I always laugh when I read that someone has an interest in "penetrative sex".

Duh.



CeriseNin -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 8:54:22 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: sexyred1

Well aside from all the chick pics, I always laugh when I read that someone has an interest in "penetrative sex".

Duh.

OT...my GOD you are beautiful.



sweetsub1957 -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 4:23:47 PM)

Were I looking, the profile itself would be cool w/ me. The pictures of other women, however, are not. They all have perfect asses and I'd be thinking (1) my ass would never measure up to theirs and, (2)even if it did, I'd end up being one of many (not cool in my opinion).

~sweetsub~



Bobanna -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/13/2010 5:42:47 PM)

The pics of the other women .. say to me :  Youre just going to be another woman in this long line of asses Im showing you.  What kind of relationship are you searching for ? ...LTR?  bootie call?  What do you have to offer to your sub/slave besides spanks and kinks?  I also agree that you should take off the silly pic rip off warning.  Stupid to the hilt.  What are you going to do when and if someone steals your pics ... try a big fat NOTHING. 
good luck

Bo



nephandi -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/14/2010 6:02:54 AM)

Greetings

My first reaction are the profile pictures. If I where looking for a Dom I would want to see more of you not other women. The anime one was cute and it works to have one or two pictures of things that in a way represent you, like your home, an interest, pets and so on, but most of the pictures should be of you.

Secondly I would drop the word true. Everyone is talking about true submissive, true liberals, true women, true Wiccans, true gamers and so on. To me that get a bit silly for what true in such a concretion really mean is a submissive according to your standards that you like, just letting it say submissive is enough, after all you will figure out who fit your standards or not yourself when you get to know some applicants. I mean I consider myself to be a true submissive but if I am true according to your standards? who knows. The word true is just off putting to many.

Now your profile text is rather okey but what I am missing is two things. If I was a sub searching for a Dom I would wonder about A what exactly are you looking for? What are your expectations for your submissive? Is is a subbie girlfriend you are looking for, or a part time sub or just a good time. You speak about good girls and spanking but what more are you looking for? Are you looking for a life partner that happens to be kinky in the bedroom or is it 24/7 you are looking for. Things like that would be nice to know. And B what would also be nice to know is a little bit more about you, not just a short paragraph of interests. I would like that section to have a bit more meat.

A last problem I see with your profile is the whole paragraph of threatening to sue pepole at the end. Basically is is an unnecessary and off putting part. If someone is doing a study and do not bother to ask for permission before using your picture then they will not care about your little disclaimer either. Get rid of it and the profile will get a whole lot better.

Other than that I think you have a rather ok profile.

I wish you well.



macs -> RE: Good or Bad profile let me know (8/15/2010 1:10:29 AM)

Thanks for the advice everyone



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