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cariad -> a novel by this slave (9/25/2004 10:55:43 AM)
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this slave has a novel she is working on and was wondering if she will be allowed to post it here, and if so would Y/you be so kind as to let her know Y/your honest opinon(s) on it as she is working on it in hopes of getting it published one day.
Master is helping by giving His input when He can get online, but she needs the opinions of others in order to help her know where she needs to re-edit what she's edited so far. this slave wants to work on it some more but without more input she doesn't feel she can until she knows where an outside reader may loose H/him or H/her self, or get caught up and not want to stop reading it.
this slave thanks Y/you for allowing her to post this and hopes to get many responses if she is allowed to post her novel or rather what she has of it here.[;)]
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