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Poem - "Forever My Daddy. Ya right." - 9/15/2010 9:09:34 AM

DaddyDomNe

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This love; that I feel.
This love? Is it real?
The love that I have is now a blight.
Happiness; Now is past.
Pain! It's here at last.
Sad for your loved one, just isn't right.

Drama, games and lies.
You try not to despise.
They can't help but be who they are.
Their mission, one of blame.
Your feelings, just a game.
Your heart just a toy to bruise and mar.

Hold a breath, exhale slow.
Just wait, the pain will go.
Once again, you'll reach that deadened, sorrowed state.
Her love, all but done.
Didn't she say you were the One?
Just another fib to scrawl upon the slate.

A convenience, nothing more.
She was never Daddy's whore.

So fun; to be tossed away, like trash!

Fight for you? Not a bit.
Used. A piece of shit.
Such "love" can be bought, for little cash.

Pale skinned beauties take their toll.
Drain your life. Maim your soul.
Hear them hiss and laugh in evil delight.
On your finger, she put a ring.
Who knew what it would bring?
Great heartbreak as well as great insight.

"Love" can be so cruel.
One silly broken rule.
You thought she was so cool.
You stupid shattered fool.
Cursed, time and time again, by shortened sight.
You were nothing but a lay.
Just a Dom with which to play.
Her heart to me now dead;
Inscribed, the ring it said;
"Forever My Daddy". Ya right.

The End

9/7/10

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RE: Poem - "Forever My Daddy. Ya right." - 9/18/2010 11:07:20 PM

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Wow...there is alot of anger & rage, plus quite a bit of bitterness. I'm sorry for your loss, whatever form that takes for you. It takes great strength and conviction to get your writings out on the page, and for it to make some sense, so you clearly accomplished this task. I urge you to further explore your writings as an outlet...many people don't fully understand the healing power of poetry and words in general. Sometimes, it might be all you have. It's the one thing no one can really take away from you (your words, you mind, your thoughts--those are yours). It's true, perhaps we give people our hearts a little too much, but without trying we would never get anywhere right? Hope you are able to find some kind of peace, if you are still hurting. We have all been there, but pain takes many forms, and it can be extremely trying to move on. I know this better than anyone. It is important to remember the past, but it's equally important to move forward as well. Though, one thing I've come to learn is that, you can't rush the healing process, for some people it's mere days, others months, and some people...like me, perhaps takes years to overcome hurdles. Anyway, people can change, sometimes you get lucky and they change for the better, sometimes they seem worse than you remembered them, but as long as you're still alive and breathing, you can make a difference in someone's life. I just wanted to remind you of this.

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RE: Poem - "Forever My Daddy. Ya right." - 9/24/2010 6:11:16 PM

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I can totally relate. Opposite gender involved, similar situation. Thanks for posting this.

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RE: Poem - "Forever My Daddy. Ya right." - 10/19/2010 6:31:52 AM

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Thanks for all the positive responses on this. Writing is cathartic.

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