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DaddyDomNe -> Poem - "Never once, did I think, it was all lies." (9/15/2010 12:30:07 PM)

"Never once, did I think, it was all lies." © 2010

When she said "I am yours."
My heart swelled! How it soars!
How warmly I smiled. How shyly she glowed.
How far we had come. How rocky the road.
Thinking back; I shake my head. Daddy cries.
Never once, did I think, it was all lies.

When she said "I'm your girl, please collar me."
Here I thought, "Our love can be!"
So proud. On her knees; So very beautiful.
Blind like Eli. Dumb like dirt. I'm fucking pitiful.
Looking back; I bow my head. A small part dies.
Never once, did I think, it was all lies.

When she said "Move on in, hubby's cool."
Once again, I'm just a fool.
I thought "This can't end well."
Then I thought, "Oh, what the hell."
So clear now. A deep breath. Daddy sighs.
Never once, did I think, it was all lies.

When she said "My Mom is pissed."
"You have to move." "You will be missed."
"My kids come first" and "I love you!"
There wasn't much that I could do.
It sounded phony. I trusted her. I asked no whys.
Never once, did I think, it was all lies.

"We're just friends." she told her spouse.
Then she came unto my house.
"Sex has sucked since we split."
"Can we please?!" I just said "Quit."
I stood firm until we said our last goodbyes.
Never once, did I think, it was all lies.

Her husband, what an ass.
Small and petty, lacking class.
But untruths she told him to.
He didn't know just what to do.
Silly games; What is he five? His pain he can't disguise.
Now at last. I hope he sees, it was all lies.

Her sister filled a lot of blanks.
I tip my hat, and owe her thanks.
B.P.D., quite a bitch.
I hope she scratched her fucking itch.
Two of them, back to back.
Why can't I see? What do I lack?
Now at last, I can see, she was no prize.
Now at last, I can see, it was all lies.

The End

9/13/10




hertz -> RE: Poem - "Never once, did I think, it was all lies." (9/15/2010 1:28:13 PM)

Really, really good. I like this a lot.




Athena25 -> The counter-side : Poem - "Never once, did I think, it was all lies." (9/26/2010 10:02:47 AM)

Through pleasure or pain......

In loss or in gain.

I fail the words and can't say anything.

I wish I were with you under your wing.

I came to you,

You collared me.

I was naive and shallow,

thinking you honored me.

Whilst in fact,

you used me for your pleasure,

and then dumped me wandering alone.

You cared not for my sighs and pain,

You heard not my moan and the painful groan.

And it was then,

that I realized,

that to be a slave,

One needed.....

Will inside.

One needed not, an abusive Master.

One needed not, an emotional disaster.

And while you've hurt me for no reason at all,

You broke your promise to hold me if I fall.

And hence today, I grant you quit.

Without you, I still exist.

I am who I am,

an individualist.

I am..... and I exist!!!




BearEssentials -> RE: Poem - "Never once, did I think, it was all lies." (10/2/2010 10:29:20 AM)

Wow. Very good. Smooth and not "campy" or full of cliches.

More importantly, I could understand what you were feeling.

Great work.




DaddyDomNe -> RE: Poem - "Never once, did I think, it was all lies." (10/19/2010 6:33:48 AM)

Thanks BearEssentials. I tried to convey a story and feelings, with the reader not necessarily knowing the back story. 




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