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YSG -> Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 12:36:39 PM)
Ok... I've spent a good portion of my day updating/crafting my profile. Yes, I have read the thread about attracting a dominant woman. I beleive I have everything mentioned there, and then some. However, I feel that it would be a good idea to ask for a review and suggestions from my target audience. Any thoughts, ideas, comments, etc are appreciated [:)]

blackpearl81 -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 12:43:59 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: YSG Ok... I've spent a good portion of my day updating/crafting my profile. Yes, I have read the thread about attracting a dominant woman. I beleive I have everything mentioned there, and then some. However, I feel that it would be a good idea to ask for a review and suggestions from my target audience. Any thoughts, ideas, comments, etc are appreciated [:)] 1. Misspelled "handsome" (forgot the "S") Other than that, the only thing I can really recommend, would be to maybe add a little more about your vanilla interests - The only thing I saw, was that you like to work out, and that you're interested in starting a band. Do you have a favorite genre of movies? How about actors? How about bands? Do you like reading? cooking? etc. (BTW - Nice Stones reference in your journal)

YSG -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 1:01:09 PM)
Ok, spelling has been fixed, and I did add a little more as far as vanilla interests go. Also, how could anyone not like the 'Stones? [:D]

blackpearl81 -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 1:33:45 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: YSG Ok, spelling has been fixed, and I did add a little more as far as vanilla interests go. Also, how could anyone not like the 'Stones? [:D] Heh - my sentiments exactly. (I was just listening to the Stones - Sympathy for the Devil) Siskel & Ebert give the revisions 2 thumbs up [8D]

Dnomyar -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 2:20:02 PM)
Mmmmm I have noticed that no Dommes have responded to this post.

LadyConstanze -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 2:24:51 PM)
I like the early Stones and I woke up my other half a few times by squeaking and laughing loudly while reading Keith Richard's biography, I heartily recommend it, fucking hilarious comments about Mick Jagger (aka Tiny Tadger aka Brenda "we talked about the bitch Brenda for hours and Mick was clueless...") You gotta love Keef, the amount of drugs he took and he's still alive, has a sense of humor and writes a great autobiography (I'm amazed that he can remember that much)

LadyPact -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 2:28:01 PM)
I'm not great at the profile review thing, so take what I say with that in mind. As to the profile itself, I happened to like it. I think I got to it after blackpearl did, as I noticed his suggestions seem to be included now. I quick skim of a couple of your journal entries does reflect some of the things you are saying in the profile, which lends to the authenticity that you are conveying your real self and interests. One thing to mention your interests. Another thing to back them up, which the combination of the profile and the journal entries do nicely. Also, you've included a mention of an area that was actually one of My favorite contributions of yours here on CM. While people new to reading your profile may not make the connection, I was glad to see you put it in there, as one of your strengths as a submissive is recognizing that female Dominants come with emotions. Much better than the misconception of the "Ice Queen" stereotype that so many folks seem to have acquired from bad sources. One word of gentle reminder. After Christmas, you'll have to update again, as your Christmas wish list won't apply after the turn of the New Year.

Ambyant -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 6:23:40 PM)
Love the journal, love it! You've posted often enough for Me to get an idea of your nature - and what you are into and how you present yourself. Honestly, after going through your intro and journal, I can only hope for the best for you and your lucky Lady when she discovers you! Wooties to see a profile that's not all about starring in a porn vid. wait.. that might be fun too, so NM! Always the best Diva~Zya

LadyNTrainer -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 7:42:11 PM)
It's spot on. Were you local and my plate not full, I'd be eyeing you quite speculatively. The only recommendation would be to fix the weird spacing between paragraphs.

YSG -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 8:03:18 PM)
Well thank you Ladies [:)] LP: Yes, I do realize Ill have to change that after Christmas. Its ok, Im pretty much updating it regularly anyway. As for my journal, well... I cant really be anyone but myself I suppose lol Ambyant: Thank you [:)] Best wishes to you and yours LNT: Yes, Im working on the spacing thing, Ive got it down a bit, but Im too tired to mess with it alot tonight. Also, thank you for making me blush [:)]

CynthiaWVirginia -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/7/2010 8:25:25 PM)
Nicely done, YSG. It was a pleasure to read. I hope that when others sign on and see a random profile, it will be yours...and that the guys will look it over and feel a sudden need to change their own to keep up with the competition. (Profiles would be a lot more fun to read.) I am clueless about all that weight lifting stuff in your journal, but it made me realize that if a kinky friend in my area was into that, I would be asking to join the workout...of course, my efforts for the first few months might send him into gales of laughter that would interfere with his own workout. [;)] If you want to give some free advice on exercizes to do, so that my arms aren't agonizing the day after a long flogging session, my mailbox on the other side is open.

LadyHibiscus -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/8/2010 3:57:32 AM)
~not ignoring you babe, just had internet issues! and now am off to traffic court. So more later!

kalikshama -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/8/2010 4:22:31 AM)
Nice profile! You left out the "s" in discipline. Best of luck to you, KK

YSG -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/8/2010 6:39:55 AM)
quote: ORIGINAL: CynthiaWVirginia Nicely done, YSG. It was a pleasure to read. I hope that when others sign on and see a random profile, it will be yours...and that the guys will look it over and feel a sudden need to change their own to keep up with the competition. (Profiles would be a lot more fun to read.) I am clueless about all that weight lifting stuff in your journal, but it made me realize that if a kinky friend in my area was into that, I would be asking to join the workout...of course, my efforts for the first few months might send him into gales of laughter that would interfere with his own workout. [;)] If you want to give some free advice on exercizes to do, so that my arms aren't agonizing the day after a long flogging session, my mailbox on the other side is open. Well, really, all you need to get started is the proper motivation and someone to show you the basics, like how to properly do the exercises (wich I could do both [;)]). If you wanted to go deeper, IE, full out bodybuilding, I would have to defer to LNT, or another personal trainer. quote: ORIGINAL: LadyHibiscus ~not ignoring you babe, just had internet issues! and now am off to traffic court. So more later! Oh, no problem hon. I hope court goes well for you today quote: ORIGINAL: kalikshama Nice profile! You left out the "s" in discipline. Best of luck to you, KK Wow, Ive had that up there for months and I've never noticed it [&:] Thank you, I will fix that immediately

LadyRian -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/8/2010 8:13:32 AM)
Well done, I like it. :)

AlexandraLynch -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/8/2010 10:06:07 PM)
I like it too. A location issue, and our politics don't align, but other than that I really like your attitude towards submission, and the profile is very inviting.

LadyHibiscus -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/9/2010 10:27:42 AM)
Sweetie! You're a LIBERTARIAN??? [sm=runaway.gif] Otherwise, really good. (It's EXORCIST, though) So, YAY! [sm=cheering.gif]

YSG -> RE: Profile reveiw, please? (12/9/2010 11:19:15 AM)
Yes, I am a Libertarian (boogy boogy boogy) [8D] I dont dislike liberals or conservatives, I just like putting holes in their theories with a little (ok, BIG) thing I like to call "logic" [:D]

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