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YoungBlondeSlave -> Profile Revision (12/9/2010 10:34:04 PM)

It's been almost two years since I last did my profile and I've just re-written it, it'll probably be a work in progress for awhile. I would really appreciate some insight and opinion about it to make it as good as it possibly can be.

Thank you in advance. [:D]



SirPumpy -> RE: Profile Revision (12/9/2010 10:45:43 PM)

Hard limits include 2 types of housework? :-)

From where I stand your profile seems quite honest but a bit too bloggy.

I think that a lot of your journal entries would put people off basically because they contain too much information for a good initial impression.

Id be looking for more lifestyle oriented thoughts in print and less doggy poo and idiot rants which are best left in the forums.

You rarely get a second chance to make a good first impression.

Id also ditch the doggy pics although its nice to see a profile with no nudes for a change, dont get me wrong here I like nudes but its something best left for discovery in someone who is seeking a Master or Dom/me.

My 2 cents

SP



YoungBlondeSlave -> RE: Profile Revision (12/9/2010 10:49:07 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: SirPumpy

Id be looking for more lifestyle oriented thoughts in print and less doggy poo and idiot rants which are best left in the forums.



Good to know, sadly it seems I haven't had enough experience recently to journal about.
The last munch I went to was almost a year ago.
[&o]



SirPumpy -> RE: Profile Revision (12/9/2010 11:03:35 PM)

Well you can always write about your last munch, of write a bit of poetry or some Haiko.

I think the biggest issue with profiles (From a blokes point of view) is that they either overload us with things we would rather discover over time or they make the person seem needy or ditzy which often isnt the case.

Its a difficult thing to do though, the profile rewrite and im sure you will get some interesting opinions.

SP



DarkSteven -> RE: Profile Revision (12/10/2010 7:08:20 AM)

Naked pictures.  [:)]



LadyConstanze -> RE: Profile Revision (12/10/2010 8:05:46 AM)

I kinda like it but it's a bit long, I would put most of that into the journal and just give a bit of information in the profile itself, people who get interested can then "dive deeper" instead of getting the information overload straight away.



angelikaJ -> RE: Profile Revision (12/10/2010 3:29:06 PM)

I would omit the financial stuff.
Your saying it is unlikely to deter the men who are likely to from emailing you and for some people any negatives are a turn off.

I would mention "no cam" but I don't think you need to justify it....nor do you need to give a reason why poly doesn't work for you.
(and of course you will get cmails soliciting for both)

You like movies.
You could post a journal entry about ones you like and why.



YoungBlondeSlave -> RE: Profile Revision (12/11/2010 12:50:02 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: angelikaJ

I would omit the financial stuff.
Your saying it is unlikely to deter the men who are likely to from emailing you and for some people any negatives are a turn off.
I would mention "no cam" but I don't think you need to justify it....nor do you need to give a reason why poly doesn't work for you.
(and of course you will get cmails soliciting for both)

You like movies.
You could post a journal entry about ones you like and why.


Okay, I understand that and I will defintely work on that, too.

Thanks everyone for all the info, I'm going to work on it for a bit.

And no Steven, no naked pics, sorry. You're going to have to take them yourself [;)]



YoungBlondeSlave -> RE: Profile Revision (12/11/2010 1:45:48 AM)

Okay, revised again. I think I've managed to remove the blurbs which indicated, well I guess pretty much just negative attitudes.

Will work on a journal entry soon also.

Thank you all for all of your help and advice.



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