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MnR (Have yet to create a title) - 3/3/2011 10:07:02 PM   
ImaginativeWhims


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You would think that after ten hours of listening to people complain about why they can’t pay their bills would be enough work for one day, but rifling through avocados at the grocery store, Marie could only sigh. Collecting the ingredients for a salad on a Thursday night shouldn’t be an unpleasant chore, but it had been a very long day and she was tired. Knowing that not having lunch ready the night before for the following day would only make her have to get up earlier, she trudged along the aisles searching for what she needed.
   The homely man at the checkout counter gave her the same smile he always gave her, chin down, eyes a little hooded. It wasn’t a devious smile as much as a  nervous smile. She glanced over him as she always did… mousey brown hair, plain brown eyes behind glasses that were a little big for his face. He wasn’t exceptionally tall, but he was taller than her by a few inches… Five foot-ten perhaps? She smiled back at him and she saw him blush.

“Thank you for coming Marie, have a beautiful night.” He smiled, as he gestured to the total.

“Thanks again Ray, I’d have a better night if I had someone to do this shopping for me.” She quirked and smiled at him, handing him a fifty-dollar bill.

   He blushed again and handed her the change, letting his hand obviously linger a little longer than necessary, but she didn’t mind. She knew he liked her, and she didn’t mind the attention at all. She was comfortable with her looks, and for the most part just shrugged off people’s compliments when they came, but for some reason she didn’t mind it with him.

“Marie would you like me to carry these bags out for you?” Ray inquired.

“I think I’ve got it for tonight Ray, but thank you anyway. Have a wonderful evening.” She responded.

   As she grabbed the bags and proceeded toward the exit, the hairs on the back of her neck stood on end and something told her to turn and look. When she did, she almost wished she hadn’t… The smile on his face was no longer a nervous smile but the smile of a Lion when he knows he’s chosen the perfect prey. He quickly glanced away, seeming to be wiping down the countertop furiously. Standing there in the exit, bags in hands, a whole new set of gooseflesh ran up Marie’s back, arms, and neck… she liked what she had seen.

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   Friday should have been a productive day, but that man’s smile. Just thinking about it sent the shivers up her spine again, but strangely they went lower places as well. Marie squirmed a bit in her chair and shook her head, running her fingers through her hair.

“Focus, focus, focus!” She whispered vehemently.

“That would be prudent, Marie. You are on the clock.” Came a voice behind her.

   Rolling her eyes she turned to her boss and shook her head exhaling.

“Look Mike, I really don’t need your shit today. It’s Friday and I’ll be leaving in an hour. Just leave me the hell alone and go on about your business.”

“You will not talk to me that way, I am your superior.” He huffed.

“No Mike, you’re just a really bad mistake that turned into an even worse lay, and now you’re mad that I want nothing from you.” She rebuked.

   He didn’t have much to say about that, and turned walking out the door.

“Fucker.” she whispered.

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   It was only six, but it was already dark as Marie pulled into the drive. Shutting off her engine and opening the door, she reached over and grabbed her purse. She walked up the small path to her front door and put the keys in, but as she turned the lock, she felt a chill run up her spine. She quickly spun looking across her yard, her car, her small tree, and the shrubs under her living room window she saw, but nothing else.
   She pushed open the door and walked in, closing it behind her and throwing the bolt.  She tossed her purse on the couch and flicked the switch for the light. It came on bathing the entire living room and dining area in a soft glow.  Marie huffed and kicked off her pumps behind the couch, thinking about how boring her weekend would be, and that bastard of a boss of hers.
   She had four of the buttons of her blouse undone as she entered the bedroom and she turned to her master bathroom to start the water. Before she could reach for the switch to turn on the light, she stopped suddenly. She’d heard a sound and the prickles running up and down her spine this time were not her imagination. She tried to move but she wasn’t fast enough, she scrambled for her dresser where she kept her small handgun, but a gloved hand clamped onto hers and another around her throat.
   She was jerked to her feet with her left arm pulled tight behind her back, and she felt a masked cheek press against hers. She hand on her throat wasn’t crushing her throat, but she was panicking.

“If you’ll listen and do as I say” Came a whisper ,”I will not harm you or violate you in any way.”

   She nodded, too afraid to speak. It was a man’s whisper, this much she knew… but there was no smell of cologne or sweat, nor aftershave that she could recognize. She shuddered as he inhaled deeply of her hair, and tried not to scream.

“You are to get locks on your windows and a security system. It is far too easy for someone who wants something from this home to simply walk in and take it. Do not be a foolish woman.” Came the whisper again. “You are to lie on the floor facedown, and not turn around until a count of fifty. Do you understand me?”

   She nodded again, but his grip on her throat tightened.

“I will hear your voice when I ask you a question and you will end the answer with the appellation ‘my master’, do you understand me?”

   Tears streaming down her face, she nodded and croaked, “I understand, my master.”

   His grips released and she fell to the floor on her stomach. She started counting aloud to fifty, trying to listen for any sound that would indicate movement.  When she reached fifty she climbed up using the bed for support and sat on the edge of it. Looking up, she saw that he hadn’t moved. She wasn’t sure what she should do next but her thoughts went completely blank as he reached up and pulled off the mask.

“R-r-r-ray?” She stammered.

   He didn’t respond but the smile he gave her was not the simple nervous one she had seen so many times, but the smile that had made her shiver the night before,…and strangely, sent those similar shivers up her back again despite the situation.
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RE: MnR (Have yet to create a title) - 3/3/2011 10:08:15 PM   
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It had been a very strange couple of months, Marie thought to herself as she knelt on her hands and knees completely naked. She knew better than to move, but the pane of glass she balanced on her back to create a table for her master was starting to chaff. She smiled to herself as she thought of how useful she was being for him and his friends tonight, when she heard them chuckle again.

“I just don’t understand it Ray, no one has luck like that.” said the dark skinned man as he shook his head. “You’ve got something going on with the dealer, no one gets those kind of cards that often.”

“It’s not the dealer I’ve got under control Xavier, it’s the table.” Ray smiled as he patted Marie’s bottom gently.

   She took a small breath as to not shake the table-top she was supporting for her master’s entertainment. He had given her a great honor by allowing her to be of use for him tonight instead of having her wait quietly in the bedroom as he usually did. She was proud that she could do such, and knew that he would tell her she was a good girl and reward her for it if she did well. She scrunched her nose and blinked rapidly, thinking how strange it was to look forward to being rewarded for such a thing, which brought her memories of the beginning of all of this.

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   He had broken into her house, assaulted her, scared her half to death, and had she been quicker… he would have been shot. Oddly she wasn’t as angry with him as she thought she should have been. He explained to her that conventional methods of buying flowers and attempting to woo her into a relationship were under him and that if she would not press charges, he would change her life forever. Ray promised her that if she would give him the chance, she would find the most fulfilling life she had never even known was possible. She gave him that chance.
   She found out that he wasn’t just a cashier at the grocery mart, but was the owner of the entire place. She found out that he demanded all of her time, if only at first, so that he may show her a new way of being. She found out quickly that the appellation “Master”, was not just something dirty people used in the bedroom.
   Ray Doyen was a Dominatrix, a sexual sadist that derived his pleasure from the absolute and infallible domination of others, and he was the most caring and kind lover that Marie had ever known. He had taken nearly seven months of her life to learn her in every way possible, and some she hadn’t even known existed. He had taken her all over the world with him to learn the history of BDSM, and why it was a lifestyle that she would greatly enjoy.
   After those seven months on a beach in Australia, he had asked her to come to her knees in front of him and pulled a box out of his pocket. In it was a silver ring with a knot of silver atop it, a lover’s knot.

“Marie Elaine Litton” He said as he looked down into her eyes, “Will you be my slave? For the rest of our lives as long as we shall live them, to serve me in all things and obey me without question?”

“Yes, my master.” She replied, tears streaming down her face, “If you will promise to continue to be fair to me in all things, as you have been.”

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   That night was the first night that he made love to her in his way. He had pulled her up from her knees and kneeled himself, brushing the sand away from her legs and scooping her into his arms. He carried her down the little stretch of beach back to the hotel they were staying at, and continued to hold her as they rode the elevator. He set her down to open the door to the room, then picked her up again and carried her across the threshold.
   He laid her on the bed and pulled off his shirt in one swift motion, tossing it behind him. He removed his shorts and stood there in the light of the moon coming through the sliding glass window, stark naked. When she gazed up from his now growing manhood, she saw that his eyes were locked onto hers. He didn’t ask her to remove her clothes as he usually did, he reached down and maneuvered her, pulling her down until she straddled the outside of his thighs with the inside of hers. She knew that she was not to make any kind of advances, that it was not her place, but she didn’t have long to wait. He reached down and gripped her panties, ripping them to shreds.



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RE: MnR (Have yet to create a title) - 3/3/2011 10:10:35 PM   
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Alright, that's where I've stopped for now... haven't decided where it's going to go from there, but yeah...

There's another of my writings, a little more... well... creative? In my journal. Feel free to comment here, I'd appreciate any feedback!


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