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The Intruder - 3/29/2011 7:27:09 PM   
eveie


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It was 115 degrees today Baby was sticking to her panties on her walk home from the store. She decided she really hated living in Phoenix, in fact she felt her bra and panties had become a permanent part of her body. As soon as she stepped through her front door she stared to strip. By the time she reached her bathroom she was completely naked. As she started her bath water sitting on the edge of the tub her thoughts were of the cute clerk who had flirted with her there. He told her he was about to get off and wanted to know if she wanted him to get her off. “How Rude,”she said out loud as she stepped into the the warm strawberry and cream scented water.

After her bath she decided to leave her windows open the night had cooled off considerably and there was a breeze. She feel asleep as soon as her head hit the pillow. There was a bump in the living room she sat up,”Maybe it's the cat” she said as she laid back down, but now she heard footsteps. This wasn't the cat... she froze.

Her cell phone was next to her on her bed, she reached for it only to have a leather gloved hand cover hers. She started to scream but the intruder's other had was around her mouth before she could.

“No need to call anyone, little one.”

Baby struggled under the weight of her intruder's body. He turned her over and with his index finger placed over his mouth he said, “Shhh.”

“Do as I say,” Then he pulled out a gun and laid it by her head, “I wont hurt you... much.”

She raised her hand to hit him he caught it and slapped her twice the sting of it went through her, but what she couldn't understand was why was her pussy getting wet. Tears rolled down her cheeks, he kissed her tears and picked up his gun he sat between her legs unzipped his pants, she tensed up afraid he was about to fuck her. He sat on the side of her bed, “On you knees,” Baby didn't move, “Now cunt, I won't say things twice and the night is young.”

“Please,” she said. He grabbed her by her hair pulling her to the floor,”I said on your knees slut!” Her knees hit the floor with a thud. “Now open your mouth,” He put the gun to her temple, but baby still refused. He gently stroked the gun along her jawline and in a kind but stern voice he said,”Open.” She obliged. He garbed the back of her head and forced his cock inside her mouth, it was large and thick it forced her to open even wider,”Now suck!” She felt the barrel of the gun pressed against her head, she sucked. He raised his hips off the bed and met her mouth with his trust. She felt as if she was going to vomit, she started gagging,”That's it little one gag on my cock.” At the sound of his voice she felt helpless and wondered why she didn't try and fight,”You're going to be my cum slut,” pulling a rope out of the pack of his pants he continued,”We’re having fun tonight, understand?”

The intruder turned Baby around she was coughing wondering if he would kill her catching her breath she said,”Please don't kill me.”When he finished tying her hands behind her he turned her around stood to meet her gaze and grabbed her chin,”Little one I wouldn't kill such a good little slut, when there is so much you can be used for.”

He pushed her back on the bed and got undressed. He climbed on top of her until his balls were on her chin,”Tongue!” She started licking his balls without a thought and then sucking them, all she could think of was she was enjoying this but she felt shame so she continued to cry. He started to slap her in the face with his massive cock she cringed but didn't stop sucking his balls, he pulled out and shoved his cock inside her mouth. She thought she would pass out she couldn't breath. He heard her muffled screams and gagging and laughed. He meant what he said he didn't want her dead, he pulled out. He turned her over, Baby could hear movement but couldn't see what the intruder was doing. Then all of a sudden SMACK!! The sting of the belt took her breath away, Baby cried out. Then again, and again, and again the intruder did it so long she lost all since of time, her mind drifted away. After his sadistic urges were sated the intruder slid his cock in side Baby's tight chocolate pussy. Baby gasped, the intruder thrusts were painful at first but Baby felt her body betraying her. She was even wetter and she came. As she came the intruder started smacking her ass with what felt like small cords. Her orgasm was even more intense. “That's it you little cum slut, I knew what you needed.” He said as he came and pulled out. As she tried to catch her breath she felt her hands loose as she pushed herself up off the bed she was alone again...
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RE: The Intruder - 3/30/2011 11:51:34 AM   
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Very hot!   Will we be reading more about "Baby"?

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RE: The Intruder - 3/30/2011 9:36:47 PM   
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Most likely it was my first. Glad you enjoyed.

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