Vancouver_cinful
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ORIGINAL: RavenMuse Thanks Ron, well after 25 years I damn well should have a good idea of what I'm after Aimed at getting everything over clearly rather than humour, more my management side came out when putting the profile together. Right Cin, let's have a look at this profile of yours should we..... Photo, only 5 there sweetie, barely a glimpse of that pretty face of yours, mearly a hint of a lovely smile. You got it gal, so flaunt it. If there wasn't that damn pond in the way I'd wander over with my camera and shoot as many as it took to get you a great profile pic. Go seduce a photographer Written profile 9. Grabs the attention, gives a good impression of what you are looking for and an even clearer idea of what you are not. The begining however does leave the impression of you fighting yourself "Am I slave or am I not?", "Best be careful what I wish for" which could colour someones view of the rest of the profile. Have to chuckle a little at your hard limits though... as I am an ex-amature boxer who enjoys Horror movies Thanks Raven, I took the time to re-work it. It needed serious editing. It won't show for a while so I hope the next person to post will pass me by and crtique the one above me. I struggle with the photo, I have a few that show my face, but I'm uncertian as to how public I want that to be. Perhaps something with a mask that shows more of the smile but still keeps some mystery? By the way, I tend to be my own pphotographer, but if there wasn't that pond, I'd take you up on your offer. Thanks, for the indepth critique! I'll rejoin this thread when my new profile is up. Back to your scheduled programming! Cin
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