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masterjonathans -> welcome to hell (6/3/2011 9:07:41 AM)

something i wrote a few years ago after an arguement with a friend

Welcome to hell both friends of the light and children of the night sink into despair at the realization that you have always been there it is not what angels expect or even what demons respect it is a place that will cause all to drown in sorrow as they watch all around them attempt to hasten their decent into your darkest fears and laugh as the tears drip down their face and fall to the ground and once they have broken you they will give you a knife to let you take your own life but after the blood has left your body and you believe you are dead you will wake up in your bed questioning if you have gone insane as you prepare to go through the same pain again this is hell and you will come to know it well.




DeviantMan -> RE: welcome to hell (6/3/2011 9:20:08 AM)

Very, very good! I added some commas, and full-stops, to make it more easily readable. No offence, I just needed to do it, to fully capture it's essence. Here it is:

Welcome to hell, both friends of the light and children of the night.
Sink into despair at the realization that you have always been there. It is not what angels expect, or even what demons respect. It is a place that will cause all to drown in sorrow, as they watch all around them attempt to hasten their decent, into your darkest fears, and laugh as the tears drip down their face and fall to the ground.
And once they have broken you, they will give you a knife to let you take your own life. But, after the blood has left your body, and you believe you are dead, you will wake up in your bed... questioning if you have gone insane, as you prepare to go through the same pain again.
This is hell, and you will come to know it well




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