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some poems that i wrote - 7/20/2011 9:47:31 PM   
Rhylin227


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hi everyone.  i don't have them posted here, but i have 3 poems that i wrote in my journal on my profile if anyone would like to take a look.  i wrote them around 4 years ago, when i was 18 or so.  every one's welcome to read them if they wish to.
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RE: some poems that i wrote - 7/25/2011 8:46:23 PM   
Rhylin227


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to make it easier, i decided to move my poems here.  enjoy.

Snow Flake  
   
We are as if snow.  
We may look the same but are oh so different.  
And I am different still.  
You were made through the love of two that becomes one.  
I was made from fragments of the existing.  
You were raised with a care and warmth.  
I was raised with research and records.  
You emerged from the womb and were welcomed.  
I have ridden the machines and people were not there.  
Decision of the pre-decided brought your birth.  
Decisions of existence brought mine.  
And what is mine?  
Nothing truly is.  
Our appearance is of repetition  
But we are all different.  
And I am different still.  
For I have ridden the machines and people were not there.


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RE: some poems that i wrote - 7/25/2011 8:47:40 PM   
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Everything is Wrong
 
I am darkness.  
She is starlight.  
Alone we are starkness.  
Together we are night.  
Her soul is starlight.  
My soul is darkness.  
Does she miss me in her radiance?  
The way that I’m missing her now?  
Lay me down in darkness.  
Lay me down in shadow.  
Shield me from the light.  
Yours is all I need.  
I reap this sorrow I have sown.  
Please just love me as your own.  
If only for a little while.  
If only for tonight.  
Everything is wrong.  
Tell me everything is right.  
I want to crawl away from sound.  
As strong as I am not.  
It always brings me down.  
I won’t look into your eyes.  
If you promise not to say my name.  
We are striving difference.  
We are one in same.  
We have chosen the ties that bind.  
They tell us they don’t need our kind.  
I’m too scared to live now.  
You make it beautiful to die.  
Too full of scorn and sorrows.  
Beneath the stars I want to lie.  
Embrace me I am your needing.  
Embrace me and steal my breath.  
Embrace me for you I am bleeding.  
Embrace me until the call of death.  
Everything is wrong.  
Tell me everything is right.  
I chill down to my bones.  
We are lovers of the night.  
We are born to walk alone.  
Hand in hand.  
In my darkness.  
Beneath your sweet starlight.


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RE: some poems that i wrote - 7/25/2011 8:48:42 PM   
Rhylin227


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Stargazer  
   
Late at night when all is right I lay and think of you.  
In the dark you make your mark in my mind like you always do.  
And my sleep may be dreamless but if it wasn’t I know I’d dream of you.  
The stars they shine like crystal wine and in your eyes they’re blue.  
I see them there, your face and hair, your beauty that runs true.  
And in your eyes I know the size of love that waits in you.  
I only hope that I can cope with this love I’m feeling too.  
You are an ocean deep and wide and filled with sparkling blue.  
I feel your touch, I need it much please let me dive in you.  
Please take my hand on diamond sand you’re my need that burns all through.  
You are my light you are what I need please let me follow you.  
And I wake in light no more the night no more the stars are blue.  
It’s time to go this I know but here I’ve dreamt of you…

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RE: some poems that i wrote - 8/7/2011 7:53:27 PM   
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Awesome stuff.  The first one's kind of confusing, the second one's happy and sad; the third one's kind of sweet, I guess.  But the second definitely rocks! 

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