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For your entertainment - 5/23/2006 1:06:41 PM

understud

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Not really sure if this is the proper place to post this but here goes a poem for your enjoyment if i may be permitted...

Hell can be Terribly Silent

Footsteps resound within my mind,
Down empty hallways, rooms en life.

Uncluttered, devoid en bare
Of life en love or even prayers

A telephone rings unanswered there
Door bells chime into lifeless air

Footsteps echo down my soul
As always I pace alone

Hell can be terribly silent!

In my heart pace I alone
Unmoved, unnoticed and so...so very cold

I see the pain of earlier times
Old wounds left by others of my kind

I stop to touch the scared over dreams
Then remember my feelings; and scream and scream

Of hurt and pain...Oh...I do know thee well
Your part en parcel of my living hell

All those people en times gone by
Silent now deep inside my mind

So now again I pace alone
And recollect all those feelings long, long gone

most humbly submitted for your pleasure

respectfully understud...

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RE: For your entertainment - 5/23/2006 1:14:30 PM

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well written, but so sad....

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RE: For your entertainment - 5/23/2006 7:18:07 PM

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Reflectivesoul; thank you for the comment. I try to write about what I feel and can understand such is life, sad but true I would hope in the future I might have the memories to post more uplifting verse. Please forgive the somber nature now manifest in my scribblings, for now it's all I have.

always respectful; respectfully submitted

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