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DomT32 -> Should alice stay or go? (10/21/2011 10:04:53 AM)

Knock, Knock, Knock on the front door to a small brick rancher.

alice begins to wonder if the guy online will be the same guy in person as she waits for him to answer the door.

Knock, Knock, Knock on the front door again. alice tries peering through the newspaper covering the window. It can't be that hard to hear someone at the door, the house is so small. Knock, Knock, Knock on the front door again but harder, making the glass vibrate tremendously.

Finally alice hears movement and tries peering through a small hole in the paper at the bottom of the window. her heart skips a beat as his physical presence is a little different then she imagined. He claimed to have broad shoulders, 260 lbs and 6'. The height is there but not the 260, looking at him alice beings to wonder how much he was letting on since he does not have a huge gut. But it quickly fades as she dips down she sees his shoulders are quite broad, alice imagines he could fit two of her and still be able to close his hands together. alice snickers to herself knowing she is still a tiny woman, most guys still can't fit two of her against their chest. As the door opens and is swung 3/4 of the way open he fills the entire door way as one shoulder edges over the stove and the other a few inches from the door. alice looks up and sees the face matches and gives a soft "hi"

"Hello, come on in." As he turns backwards, alice slips in only having to slightly turns sideways to get in. He closes the door and as they both turn around he steps in close to her, gently place his hand in the small of alice's back and pulling alice in close.

"It is nice to see you don't disappoint." with a big fat grin on his face.

alice gives a little giggle "the same to you" as she wraps her hands around his neck. He slowly moves in and gives her a soft, warm yet firm kiss. alice returns the kiss but after it breaks asks "what was that for?"

"Felt right. So what would you like to do first?"

"i don't know, what would you like to do?" as alice begins to pull away, wondering if he was really the dominant he claimed to be.

"Well you are a guest in my home, I let the guests take first shot." still grinning, not noticing alice's shift in body language.

"i thought i was more then a guest coming here." alice returns disappointedly

As the grin disappears and voice deepens towards the end. "Well yes you are more then the average guest, but still a guest. you are not mine yet."

"ok, well show me around then" as alice becomes a little more at ease knowing what he said was true. she wasn't really his but were meeting to see if it could go to the next step.

He starts showing her around the small home, taking only a few minutes to do so, while skipping the basement. He then takes her outside and walking around the yard. Showing her the grape vines, raspberry bushes, the attempted garden, black walnut trees back in the woods, the fruit tress in the front. Carrying on about the plans for the future of the property, where the master bedroom would go to look out over the valley and neighboring farmland below. All of this was nice to hear but none of it was impressing or making alice desire him. He was too nice, too soft, too vanilla for her; he wasn't the guy online. alice began to dread her decision to come, he wasn't a bad guy just not the right guy for her. So after going around the house for about 30 minutes, they come back in and he offers alice something to drink as he begins making a late lunch. alice offers to help but he refuses, saying she is a guest but if she wants to help she can set the table. alice gets a bit frustrated but quietly and quickly gets the table set then sits and sips her drink. alice tries to make small talk but he gives short answers or doesn't even answer at all. The resentment and frustration begin to build quickly in alice as if she feels duped once again by a fake online.

As lunch is served, he seems completely unaware of how alice is feeling let alone how weak is coming off. Lunch is pretty quiet and a little awkward on both sides of the table. alice is wondering how long it can take but at least the food is half way descent. Compared to some guys, he actually knows how to make something editable, at least one good thing out of the day alice ponders to herself.

"what is that door for?" alice points towards a door only a few feet away.

"it is where you go to scream" in a cold dark tone.

"WHAT? Are you serious?" alice quips back

"Yes, but that isn't for you yet." in the same tone but gives a dead stare

alice begins to laugh out loud "you think you are going to scare me? Lets go look at your so called dungeon, Master."

"OKay but there is only a hook right now."

"OOOOHHhhh a hook, how scary?" alice continues to laugh as she follows him down the old wobbly wooden stairs.

He turns only 1 light on, which simply lights up the bottom steps and turns the corner. He quickly walks into the dark corner off to the right of the stairs and is out of sight by the time alice reaches the bottom. He pulls on a pull-chain light and the single bulb turns on. alice sees the washer, dryer and furnace but nothing else but some hung drywall.

"So where is this famous hook?" alice snips. He turns and points to it tight up against the back concrete wall. alice walks over and reaches her hands up towards the hook, not too far but high enough she couldn't easily free herself.

"Why don't you tie me up big boy and show me how you would make me scream?" alice teases, knowing she feels no threat will come to her. she is in control, pulling her pants down simply to taunt him.

He wipes his nose and quietly pulls a piece of rope off the stand to the right of the hook. He finds the center of the rope, placing it between her hands and wraps it around alice's wrists a few times then stretching it to the end and putting the knot there. Pulling on the knot He leads alice up close to the wall and begins to stretch her. alice quickly realizes the hook is a lot higher then she really thought and is nearly completely on her tippy toes and she is really tight against the wall. But the rough concrete against her tits feels good. He gives her ass a little slap.

"IS that the best you've got? I thought you were going to make me scream." alice snips back with a slight condescending tone.

He slaps her ass a few more times each a little bit harder then the last.

"REALLY?" as alice's patiences begins to run out.

He stretches his long arm back and smacks her ass hard several times leaving his hand print across her entire ass. Finally alice cries out with each smack but looks back and begins to laugh.

"I've had a lot worse and a lot better." as alice pushes her ass out leaving her just on her tippy toes. alice begins to wiggle her ass back and forth as she laughs looking back at him. He is watching her taught him, laughing at him but he is keeping his cool.

And then it happens.

He closes his eyes and pulls his belt off. Folding the ends together, the belts squeaks as the tension increases. alice turns back laughing and smiling only to see his jaw tighten in the poor light and the empty look as he opens his eyes. Before alice can say anything He reaches back turning his hips in unison and swinging all the way through. Hitting her ass so hard, alice's knees hit the wall followed by her hips making her cry out. He hand smashes into the wall, scraping the skin off his knuckles, making him shake his hand from the pain. But He recovers and moving 6 inches to the right he begins to repeat his strikes moving up and down her ass. Never in the same place twice but making sure to always over lap the previous in both directions. alice cries out for help, begging for him to stop, screaming at the top of her lungs for help. But to no avail, He continues but as her ass has become cherry red in only a few swings he begins moving to her legs and lower back. Moving up and down till her entire back side is cherry red, leaving no spot unmarked. Even holding her legs open to swing up against her cunt. Making sure to recover any area that is losing color over the next 30 minutes.

He grabs her hair and pulls her up while use the other hand to take her off the hook. He throws her face down onto the dusty concrete floor. Once again grabbing her hair he pulls her head up.

"I welcomed you into my home as a guest and you disrespected me. I told you before I have a short fuse and I do not relent in my punishment. As you can tell no one came to your aid because no neighbor can hear you scream even at the top of your lungs. you can cry all you want but I will never let such disobedience go, you knew better but you decided it was smarter to push and test me. Well I hope you got what you wanted because now I'm not sure if I even want your slutty ass. you can crawl back upstairs."

Letting her hair go, alice's head quickly drops to the floor as tears stream down her face. The pain coursing through her body is more then she thought she could ever take. He goes back upstairs leaving her there. alice tried to move her legs but the pain is too much, her arms work but her wrists and shoulders bite from being bound for so long. alice decides to lay there crying and wondering why she ever came. This was not suppose to happen, he was to be loving and caring. He was suppose to be a dominant not to go from super weak to a crazy freak. alice wondered how she could have fallen for such a man. Knowing she had to leave she struggled to find a way to get upstairs. Slowly inch by inch she made her way closer to the stairs but she was weak from the beating and emotionally drained. alice falls asleep out of sheer exhaustion.

alice awakens to finds herself completely naked, super sore and at the bottom of the stairs. alice tries to climb the stairs, hurting all over and falling a couple of times as her body gives out. The basement door open and He makes is way down the stairs. alice begins to curl up as best as she can on the stairs and begins to cry. He pulls on her hair and tells her to drink the OJ, tilting the glass for her as some spills over her mouth. Once the glass is empty he drops her and goes back upstairs. alice is glad to have something inside her and he didn't do anything to her but is aching to leave and go home.

The juice helped but it isn't enough to get alice up the next couple of steps. He finally comes back down, shoving his thumb up her ass and middle finger up her cunt. He grabs her hair and picks her up and begins carrying her upstairs. He puts her into a bath filled with Epson salt and piping hot water. He leaves and comes back with some more OJ, pulling on her hair to make sure she drinks it, while telling her He doesn't want her to pass out in the water. He then leaves and closes the door and mills around the house leaving alice all alone. He comes back about 45 minutes later, empties the tub, pulls alice out of the water and stands her on her feet, wraps an towel around her and takes a step back.

"you can here to get past the online stuff and instead you decided to insult me in My own home. you got what you deserved, no matter how small you may feel the insult was. So it will come down to this, you can either go and be on your own again or you can ask for forgiveness and for your collar. There will be no second chances once you have made your choice it is made. you got close enough to me to allow you into My home and I treated you with respect as a guest in it, even though you disrespected me I like you enough to forgive and forget. But mark my word, yesterday was the taste of the worst but I also expect more out of you so such a punishment is not ever needed again. So get dressed and come out with your choice made." He turns and walks out.

Should alice leave? stay?

What was alice thinking while in the tub?





MCLady -> RE: Should alice stay or go? (10/21/2011 11:47:29 AM)

That was a really good story & I hope that you post more chapters of Alice's journey w/her new dom!!  If of course she decides to stay[:D]




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