Casteele
Posts: 655
Joined: 12/10/2011 From: Near Sacramento, California, USA Status: offline
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Greetings and welcome to CM, sara! I read your profile and can't see much that is glaring out at me that I'd suggest changing, looks pretty good.. The only thing I would definitely rewrite is the very start. My first impression is that you are still learning to completely come to terms with your transition to womanhood--which is perfectly okay, too, we all have periods in our lives where we learn to come to terms with something we discover about ourselves. I would suggest you simply state who and what you are and move on to the next thing. In general, and not specific to you, a profile should offer no explanations (no one should ever need to explain who they are) unless you have a specific reason to, justifications (you didn't do anything wrong that needs a justification), or [self-or-other] reaffirmations (that is, when you write "This is who I am and I am okay with it, damnit!" type statements; It only highlights that you may not yet be comfortable with that aspect of yourself) In this lifestyle, I often see people whom are truly unique or far outside of the social norms.. And they are accepted, often without anyone even batting an eyelash or questioning beyond mere curiosity. That is what attracted me to the lifestyle more than anything else, and keeps me returning to such wonderful people. Best wishes on your journey!
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