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jharris79tampa -> Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:39:10 PM)
If anyone can help me, please do. I am seeking to serve a Dom, and serve as a submissive/secretary for him at his office after hours. He wants me to submit a resume. I submitted the following one to him and he said it was not professional. Does anyone have hints as to what I might be missing or how i can improve it? I have until Monday! PS, i am applying as my fem name that is Jill Harris Objective To obtain a secretarial position where I can show off my supreme office skills, as well as intangible skills that fit my personality. I am a businesswoman who does what she is told and would love to be able to show my loyalty and dedication to a businessman who could use a creative bubbly woman around the office. My main objective is to please! Experience Webcam Model 1/2011-7/2011 I have shown my body for men and women on the internet. Duties included: following orders and performing in a submissive role. Performances included dressing and using props on myself. Submissive Bottom Servant 5/2005-4/2007 I served a BBW Mistress in Long Island, NY for 2 years. Services included but were not limited to massages, foot worship, extensive pussy and ass eating, receiving nipple torture and spankings, drinking beer or liquor from dog bowl, sleeping at foot of the bed, humiliation Education I am a college graduate, from a prestigious University. Education will only get me so far with this position. When it comes to being a good secretary, my education will only apply to the business related functions of the position. While there is no pertinent education related to the remainder of my duties of servitude, with hope, my new employer would hopefully provide it to me. I would be willing to pay for such on the job education in some way. I am confident that my servant skills and ability to please my boss in other ways will be quickly learned. Skills - Good with my hands - Follows orders and commands without hesitation - Smart - Discrete - Able to withstand verbal humiliation to please others - Take criticism and feedback and practice improving on weak areas - Computer savvy - Able to do most office tasks, including cleaning - Willing to adapt to any dress code desired of me References Available upon request.

poise -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:43:23 PM)
Well, quite clearly if the position you are seeking involves actual secretarial work, he may be concerned that you make no mention of those skills in your resume.

Lockit -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:47:59 PM)
No one here can know what he means. I saw nothing of your office skills given in description, so I would assume he meant that, but can have no way to know. Work on the business end and create a very short paragraph on the submissive part? I've seen some of these dominants offering a job as well as a submissive position... there is something about it that I think a little off. This isn't The Secretary. If you take our suggestions and it doesn't work out... who are you going to blame?

jharris79tampa -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:48:09 PM)
he said it needed to be more professional...

jharris79tampa -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:49:34 PM)
thanks for the suggestions, looking for anything else I might be able to add to impress him

Lockit -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:51:23 PM)
Google making a resume. There are different ways to do them. If you can't do one or figure it out... what makes you think you are ready to take on a professional secretarial position? He's letting you know this isn't just submission... he wants an all in one... secretary... professional secretary and submissive. Which... I have to wonder how labor laws could fuck his world up. lol

poise -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:54:45 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: jharris79tampa thanks for the suggestions, looking for anything else I might be able to add to impress him Also, asking us to give you pointers on how to impress him is like handing you the keys to our luxury vehicle, but you not having the knowledge to drive it. If he is commenting on the format alone and not the text, and you have Microsoft Word, open that up and click on File, then New. You will see a variety of resume styles to use.

jharris79tampa -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:55:04 PM)
he doesnt want a real secretary, but he WILL use me in that capacity. I brought the secretary role play part into it, but now hes really following through and making me apply, and thought my first attempt was pathetic and is giving me one more chance.

Lockit -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 6:59:29 PM)
Oh shit. You failed to mention this was part of a kinky assignment you started on role play. Who the hell knows? He could want a professional blow job under the desk... You know him and we don't. You started this, now go finish it.

jharris79tampa -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:07:42 PM)
i was sincerely looking for help to make my resume better Lockit.

barelynangel -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:08:09 PM)
To me if he says he wants it to be more professional, then think of what you would have on your resume if you were applying at ANY COMPANY as a secretarial position - i.e. the professional position you are actually applying for. But maybe he simply wants to see how creative you are in turning what you have for a resume and manipulate it to sound professional "I have shown my body for men and women on the internet. Duties included: following orders and performing in a submissive role. Performances included dressing and using props on myself. " Maybe try and be more creative -- i usually get too wordy when doing this but here's a quick grins what i call my bullshit flushout lol: My outgoing people skills and extraordinary ability to interact with a wide variety of people allows me to confidently manipulate various devices and hardware as well as computer skills which include multiple softwares, internet website tweeking. This assists me in creating an imaginative atmosphere where my talents to follow the directive of others, be a team player, and enjoyment of inhancing the satisfaction of every team member to complete tasks requested of me. To me, i would think he wants you to manipulate your skills into a professional secretarial type resume instead of being directly about sex in the office concept. angel

littlewonder -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:09:54 PM)
It's not professional because he doesn't want to know about your submission or kinkiness. He wants to know about your secretarial experience...ya know....a REAL resume as if you were applying for a real honest to god clerical job, even if this is roleplay. He's treating it as the real thing though to make it more real from the sounds of it. There's tons of examples online..google clerical resume.

poise -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:10:59 PM)
Miss Lockit, before this thread breathes it's last breath, I would like you to know that I would gladly stuff 1001 envelopes for you. [:)]

jharris79tampa -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:14:24 PM)
thanks everyone for your help, its starting to click for me now. i really want to please him

HisPet21 -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:21:45 PM)
The format of your resume is pretty bad. When writing up a resume, you shouldn't use the first person, or any other personal pronouns for that matter. Most resumes are in bullet form, rather than paragraph form. And you need to be more detailed in your work experience.

AngelSighs -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 7:35:14 PM)
Having spent 15.5 years of my life doing that kind of work, I do recommend bullet points. Don't provide a "play by play" of what you did during the day........boring and gets to the "circular file" almost immediately. Also, make them about how you saved the company money, created special process (or streamlined them), and if you managed anyone bring that into this. It sounds like he's looking for at least a real-life type resume of someone that would do clerical work. I AM an EXCEL GODDESS!!

SweetCheri -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 8:01:58 PM)
Microsoft Office has a built in resume wizard that will build a professional looking resume for you. It has a bunch of templates and styles, it asks questions and puts your answers into the right place & format for you. I'm not sure, but I think Open Office has something similar.

NiceButMeanGirl -> RE: Need help with resume (12/30/2011 8:54:43 PM)
Maybe write the resume in bullet form rather than how you have it here. Also focus more on the actual secretarial skills you possess if any, rather than the sexual stuff. And also maybe call the sexual stuff "various personal services" or something like that. You don't have to be blatantly sexual. Even if this is role play, it sounds like he wants it to be more "real" and, if that's the case, being blatantly sexual is a no no and could be called sexual harassment. Otherwise, I don't know what to say. NBMG

DarkSteven -> RE: Need help with resume (12/31/2011 3:58:38 AM)
1. Your Objective is too effusive. Just "A secretarial position" would suffice. 2. Your Work experience is nothing but kink. Put in your actual work experience. 3. "Your Education starts with I am a college graduate, from a prestigious University", and then denigrates the value of your degree. It SHOULD say something like University of Calgary, BS in Business. 4. Your Skills include Computer Savvy, with no details, and all the others are kink. It should have your typing speed, your experience with Office programs, etc. Your whole resume looks like you're only thinking about your kinks.

hangemhigh1953 -> RE: Need help with resume (12/31/2011 4:04:38 AM)
It looks like an online sub profile, not a professional resume. Focus on what a good employee you would be rather than what a good kink partner you'd be.

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