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An Ode To You - 2/16/2012 5:24:38 PM   
TheCageMaker


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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I want to do real
Nasty things to you

I am a real sadist
That much is true
So what will happen
Here is a clue

You’ll be beaten
Black and blue
With no limits and
Nothing being taboo

You will be shaved
From toe to head
Before being bound
To a rusty old bed

Being placed in bondage
Tightly bound by rope
With having a way out
You have absolutely no hope

Offered no mercy
As I make you cry
No chance of escape
No matter what you try

For you will be mine
Mind body and soul
Until the day you’re buried
In a six foot deep hole
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RE: An Ode To You - 2/16/2012 5:34:08 PM   
ladynlord


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Nice! A little forced in some spots, but overall, very creative. Too much time on your hands!! LOL

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RE: An Ode To You - 2/20/2012 8:40:41 AM   
RnDJ


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very good!!! We love it!

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