LunaM
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ORIGINAL: LunaM Lol love the picture BurntKitty! It made me chuckle. Thanks Sin and DomMein for the welcome and to LookieNoNookie for the helpful advice although that would take a long time to do that *smirk* Yo, Luna, just thought i'd let you know that you forgot a period on the end of the sentence, and a comma would have been useful in between 'welcome' and 'and'. Told you i wouldn't pull any punches. I think that should bring me up to 2-0. ;) Bwahahaha. The war isn't over yet :P By the way, you forgot to captialize I in two areas. That's 2-1.
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~BloodRed's Slave~ ~Love is our response to our highest values and can be nothing else~ ~And yet she had never felt more totally committed to a will, which was not her own, more totally a slave and more content to be so~
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