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Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/12/2012 5:12:43 PM

DomHypnoTV39

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Give me feedback on my vision!

Anything not said?

To much said?

Anything missing?

What more would you need to jump on board?

Angeline

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/12/2012 5:20:43 PM

Alecta

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I feel confused after reading all that. Are you offering a slave training programme? Or is your intention an "orphanage" for unowned/unwanted slaves?

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/12/2012 5:34:32 PM

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What I could understand of what you said, was unrealistic in the sense of promising to do things I don't believe can be done or someone would have been doing it long before you and everyone would know about it and it just doesn't make sense on a whole.

If you are marketing something, you ought to be clear on what you are marketing, what can and will happen, what charges there may be and give some assurance that you know what you're doing, it is legal and those that get involved are safe with more than some promises. So far it looks to me like you are trying to entice people into something that you think is needed and if it was a real need, people wouldn't need to be enticed. The whole profile makes no real sense. Start over.

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/12/2012 5:36:27 PM

poise

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It sounds like you want to open up an intermission day spa, for those that are currently
without partners, are tired of looking online, yet still want to be kinky, and either have enough
funds to make the trip, or no funds at all since you will make them independently wealthy,
but not if they want a penis enlargement, or female movements. They can become younger,
and prettier too! And they can get out anytime they want. Well, at specific intervals at least.
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Oh yeah, and since you aren't sure if owning someone is legal, you may not stick around
for too long, but they will all be able to go on without you.

That about sums it up, yes?

< Message edited by poise -- 3/12/2012 5:37:39 PM >

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/12/2012 6:34:03 PM

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You seem to want several things.

1. To start a poly family.
2. To train Dom/mes in how to Dominate.
3. To assist MtFs in learning how to act/appear more feminine.

You threw that all together, with no clear delineation between them. Confusing as hell. Also, if you do intend to assist MtFs, do you intend to help with the medical issues of hormones, SRS, etc., or simply the behavioral aspects?

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/12/2012 8:02:47 PM

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I just want to know why every MtF that comes on here has better legs than I do. What the fuck?

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 4:48:39 AM

sheisreeds

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I feel like I just read the personals Ad for the Rocky Horror Picture Show.

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 6:50:34 AM

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This place does scare me!

in what possible universe is someone going to read that and think that someone really is going to make them younger (!!!) prettier and well, just an all round better person!

Just how low does your IQ need to be to read that and not think scam!

Or maybe he's got a time machine lying around somewhere...

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 6:56:32 AM

GreedyTop

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quote:

ORIGINAL: sheisreeds

I feel like I just read the personals Ad for the Rocky Horror Picture Show.

nah, Frank was more direct and concise.

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 9:22:08 AM

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 9:23:13 AM

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Jebus!!!! Lou Reed still washes up pretty good, don't he?

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 9:24:31 AM

GreedyTop

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Lou NEVER looked as good as Tim did in that outfit!!

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 9:44:37 AM

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quote:

ORIGINAL: GreedyTop

Lou NEVER looked as good as Tim did in that outfit!!

Tim = yum

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 10:12:57 AM

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Honestly, there are some things that could be said with greater clarity. I usually appreciate in-depth profiles, but perhaps a very clear, short run-down of what you're looking for before you start discussing each, as it seems you're seeking more than one thing. For example, some things you seem to be offering to members of your household, some to customers, and on reading, I'm not sure which is which much of the time.

I do appreciate you're coming here for feedback and improvement. If only more did so!

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 11:45:38 AM

DesFIP

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Too damn much negativity for me to waste my time on. And I don't see why someone would have to join with you in order to explore privately with their partner. Which I thought is what your target audience was considering that half sentence about German speaking doms/

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 12:30:34 PM

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I Just have one question you say 3 months living expenses but no job. If they don't have a job how can you expect them to have 3 months living expenses?

Matt's littleone

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/13/2012 12:36:56 PM

DaddySatyr

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It's just a jump to the left ...

Time Warp

Welcome to the OP. Good luck in your search.

Peace and comfort,

Michael

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RE: Check my profile if my vision is clearly communicated! - 3/14/2012 4:27:23 AM

DomHypnoTV39

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Thank you all for your feedback!

quote:

ORIGINAL: Alecta

I feel confused after reading all that. Are you offering a slave training programme? Or is your intention an "orphanage" for unowned/unwanted slaves?

quote:

ORIGINAL: poise

It sounds like you want to open up an intermission day spa, for those that are currently
without partners, ...

. . . intermission day spa - I like that ;) but yes you could interpret if that way too, also orphanage for unowned/unwanted slaves would fit.

quote:

ORIGINAL: Lockit

What I could understand of what you said, was unrealistic in the sense of promising to do things I don't believe can be done or someone would have been doing it long before you and everyone would know about it and it just doesn't make sense on a whole.

Maybe someone has done it but isn't talking about it?!

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ORIGINAL: DarkSteven

You seem to want several things.

1. To start a poly family.
2. To train Dom/mes in how to Dominate.
3. To assist MtFs in learning how to act/appear more feminine.

You threw that all together, with no clear delineation between them. Confusing as hell. Also, if you do intend to assist MtFs, do you intend to help with the medical issues of hormones, SRS, etc., or simply the behavioral aspects?

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ORIGINAL: WestBaySlave

Honestly, there are some things that could be said with greater clarity. I usually appreciate in-depth profiles, but perhaps a very clear, short run-down of what you're looking for before you start discussing each, as it seems you're seeking more than one thing. For example, some things you seem to be offering to members of your household, some to customers, and on reading, I'm not sure which is which much of the time.

Yes, I do want a lot of things, the idea grew for years and by observation of some kinky sites and the challenges most people have. So for the first attempt to communicate my vision I think I've done a pretty good job. Interestingly some find it confusing where others find it clearly and detailed layed out. Overall most people seem to get the point though.

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ORIGINAL: littleone35

I Just have one question you say 3 months living expenses but no job. If they don't have a job how can you expect them to have 3 months living expenses?

Matt's littleone

Yes that reduces my prospects quite a bit. :( This is for Phase 1 of the project where I wanted the most serious prospects and work with them in person.