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Barbara -> some poems to share.... (10/27/2004 6:31:16 AM)

Greetings! I just recently joined collarme.com and was glad to see a message board devoted to creative writings. I wanted to share a few poems here...I am proud to say a couple have even been published!
Thanks for reading! Hope you enjoy!
Barbie

subsumed
she quietly exploded
unconcerned
her mind sinking in a sea
splatters
enthralled
undergoing detail
memories
so lucid

suffocated
she quietly detonated
unnoticed
her heart sinking to the floor
splatters
encrusted
undergoing detail
evisceration
so meticulous
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I see you, my darkest desire
Can you see the tears
running
down my cheeks
peering through
the veil of night
Tears shed for you, my deranged desire
Tears
you alone will relish

nessesary pains
inspire blood
Can you see the droplets
meandering
down my backside
saturating through
the veil of night
Blood drawn for you, my deviant desire
Oozing
you alone will savor

obvious pleasures
create wetness
Can you see the white juices
glistening
between my legs
pressing
the veil of night
against my flesh
Cream
you alone will devour

and in your voice
A knowledge, a knowing
you know

and in your voice
An indefinable timber
you know me

and
over the edge
Dangling over, aaaahhhhhh!
I am home
and safe

Oh erotic sea
I drown
filling my soul

Oh extremities
I plunge
engorging my mind

absolutes
I grasp onto
gritting my teeth

Oh darkness
need not invalidate
one's inate purity
and the depths of
longing
within

my future cast
please
pull me up
Please!
one more time
so I can sink
again
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A Tale of Truth

My truest self
began as a novel
each day turning a page
of a most private story
authored by me
unravelling
layer upon layer
deeper, more nuanced
like a fine old sherry

My chapters blur
Unto the sheets
thoughts empty
words spill
indelible ink flows
Your soul the paper
I wish to write upon
a most divine fairy tale
authored by me

Our tale unfolded
so long ago
and with it misery
the bitter pill for a
simple truth told
given great detail
Only time will reckon
For we are the merrier fools
Two lost authors
who, are united
in
hopeful dreams
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theroebabe -> RE: some poems to share.... (10/27/2004 6:39:19 AM)

Hi Barbie and thanks for sharing your thoughts with us!




cariad -> RE: some poems to share.... (10/27/2004 10:28:33 AM)

very nice poems........if you or anyO/one else is interested in seeing any writings this slave has please feel free to go to: http://members.shaw.ca/tarkell33 and go to index2.html ........as that is where her works are...she just updated her site lastnight with more of the first novel she has written and when she gets a chance she will add her other novel to it.



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blushes4u -> RE: some poems to share.... (10/27/2004 2:17:25 PM)

Hi Barbie ...welcome to the site and a BIG welcome to creative writings!! I enjoyed your words and look forward to seeing more :)




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