Try in your understanding to imagine writing the entire 9 chapters with one finger on an android phone. Really guys. I did edit the piece. Typewriters were better.
Sweetie don't worry, the story more than made up for the occasional run-together of words - honest! Well, in my book anyway... just wish you would write more!
I am no Goddess sweetie, just a submissive brat who has time on her hands to read well written literature that keeps me in the right frame of mind... and I like your stories - all of them xx