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Sweet19712 -> piss trained (5/23/2012 8:16:02 PM)

You prepared yourself for bed and looked at your pet naked, gagged and hog tied on the rug by the bed. That was where she was to sleep for that night. You were looking forward to the training that would start in the morning and looked at the large syringe and glass sitting by the bed.

Hours later your need to pee woke you and you found your pet had somehow managed to fall asleep in her uncomfortable position. You turned on the web cam and focused it on her and waited until the viewers climbed. You took the electric prod and zapped her ass waking her.

In a low and comforting voice you told her good morning as you stroked her hair. "You are the most beautiful when you are in complete surrender to me," you said, "You like pleasing me don't you pet?"

At my nod, you continued, "Today starts training. You are going to drink my piss." You watch as my eyes fill with tears as the internal conflict rebels against your words and yet you continue to touch my face softly, caressing it, encouraging me to accept your words and actions. You move back and start pissing in a glass and then take the syringe and fill it with your piss. You slide the syringe to the side of my mouth so the fluid will flow easily down my throat and begin to inject. When all of it was swallowed you told me what a good little servant i was and then told me how many people just watched me drank your piss. Each day started with the training and i was not allowed to sleep comfortably in bed with you until training was over.

The day came that you knew it was time for training to be over. You told me what a dirty little slut i was for drinking your piss so eagerly. You told me that training was officially over and that a new ritual would be performed. Every morning i would eagerly drink your piss and whenever you said you had to piss i was to stop what i was doing, come kneel before you, lean my head back and open my mouth ready to receive your gift. Punishment would follow if i didn't adhere to the new policy.

It wasn't too long after that you had some people over and those four words came out of your mouth and you watched to see if i would obey...




ameleea -> RE: piss trained (5/27/2012 7:40:33 AM)

interesting but too short




Sweet19712 -> RE: piss trained (5/27/2012 1:02:08 PM)

Thanks - I wasn't sure how well this would be received so I did leave out some details. And considering the number of views to responses, I guess it didn't go over too well. Haha but I am okay with that too.

Cheers!




kittenheels43 -> RE: piss trained (5/27/2012 1:50:25 PM)

it was pretty well written, but yes, needs filling out a little and I think you stopped a little short, it just ended, without a grand finalle, I was waiting for part 2 in fact (yes, I actually was watching for part 2 :) . When writing remember this one thing, reading takes much less time than writing lol




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