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Simcity7991 -> My Profile (5/25/2012 6:13:49 AM)

Good morning everyone, I was just wondering if anyone would be so kind enough (or cruel enough lol) to critique my profile and perhaps give me advice as to how I should improve it. I'm looking for a relationship with a dominant woman but I've had no luck so I'm wondering if my profile is the biggest factor since it is technically the first impression on this site.

Thank you,

Sim



Madame4a -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 6:27:17 AM)

Not bad... but please change the picture so its just you -- not one you've obviously cut someone out of...

some puntuation would not be bad...

and I do, of course, know who Thomas Hardy is -- Far From the Madding Crowd was one of my favorite books in college; I studied Hardy for a year in college.



Simcity7991 -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 6:34:19 AM)

Thank you so much for your freedback, and Far From the Madding Crowd was excellent, but I think The Return of the Native is definitely my favorite all time by Hardy.



LadyPact -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 6:47:22 AM)

Absolutely kill the picture that you had to cut other people out of the shot. 

I was rather confused by your seeking list.  You list yourself as a submissive, but you are seeking female submissives?  Your who you are looking for list looks like you hit anything that might be female, regardless of role.

I didn't see anything on your profile that says anything about why you might be on this site, as opposed to E-Harmony.  There is nothing about your experiences in the lifestyle whatsoever.  You've got some kink activities on the interest list, but have nothing that gives the reader any idea of the activities you have actually done, rather than those you think might be fun. 



Simcity7991 -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 6:56:00 AM)

Thank you LadyPact, your message was very helpful.



DarkSteven -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 7:15:37 AM)

Generally, your pics are excellent. The standard one of the man taking a pic holding the camera (just like my main pic). One showing you being athletic and manly like. And that lovely one of the piano and the dog. But rotate the sideways ones.

Your journal entry is poetic and a nice little surprise. Seeing as how so many others are whines about fakes, etc., yours is very nice.

The only suggestion I'd have are to do a spell check. And what's with a 21 year old student saying he's financially secure? What's that mean?



Simcity7991 -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 7:19:08 AM)

Thanks DarkSteven, I guess by financially secure I'm just trying to say that I have a job and can provide for myself. I want to show that as much as I would like to serve and be a sub, I'm also independant and can take care of myself. if that makes any sense.



OttersSwim -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 7:19:24 AM)

You know, it is a good profile! Congrats for not being totally kink oriented and self focused!

The issue I will point out to you is your screen name - Simcity is a game based on pretending/simulating real life. That may suggest to some that you are looking for online and not real life interaction.



Simcity7991 -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 7:21:45 AM)

thank you OttersSwim, my real name is actually Simer so I guess I thought I was being humorous/creative when I made my screen name simcity lol



Soyokaze -> RE: My Profile (5/25/2012 7:48:48 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: DarkSteven

Generally, your pics are excellent. The standard one of the man taking a pic holding the camera (just like my main pic). One showing you being athletic and manly like. And that lovely one of the piano and the dog. But rotate the sideways ones.



I prefer setting my cell phone on a timer personally, and you should do it in at least 4" heels so walking back and forth to set it is a challenge (not really for me ^.^) : p



TheRyan7 -> RE: My Profile (6/18/2012 6:56:49 AM)

I personally cant stand iphone mirror pics. Especially if your going to show your face. It looks goofy when someone is staring at there phone. Im wondering how many pictures you took before you said to yourself yeah thats the one. The best pics are with friends. Being yourself with people you know looks ALOT better than in a closet by yourself with your iphone and a mirror. IMO



masmiss -> RE: My Profile (6/18/2012 7:18:31 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: TheRyan7

I personally cant stand iphone mirror pics. Especially if your going to show your face. It looks goofy when someone is staring at there phone. Im wondering how many pictures you took before you said to yourself yeah thats the one. The best pics are with friends. Being yourself with people you know looks ALOT better than in a closet by yourself with your iphone and a mirror. IMO



As long as you have the permission of the friends to have their photographs posted on a kinky website.



LadyHibiscus -> RE: My Profile (6/18/2012 7:23:50 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: TheRyan7

I personally cant stand iphone mirror pics. Especially if your going to show your face. It looks goofy when someone is staring at there phone. Im wondering how many pictures you took before you said to yourself yeah thats the one. The best pics are with friends. Being yourself with people you know looks ALOT better than in a closet by yourself with your iphone and a mirror. IMO


I am instantly suspicious of those pictures---who are those other people and do they know they are on a kink site? I've had pics up on my profile in the past from various CM meets OF OTHER CM MEMBERS, and identified them in my profile.

Worst, for me, are the ones with booze. I've been known to have scotch for dinner a time or two, but really? NOT commemorating that on the interwebs.



Bill41 -> RE: My Profile (6/18/2012 7:59:08 AM)

Pretty good sim,

i see you already made some of the suggested changes. i have not posted any personal shots yet but i was planning on borrowing a tripod and attaching my iphone to that to get a better background. you might want to try the same. That way we will not have to see the inside of your closet. i really like what you wrote sounds very genuine.

bill



QueenRah -> RE: My Profile (6/18/2012 10:42:25 AM)

Yours is a good profile. You've presented yourself as a person of numerous facets, which isn't always seen in other people's profiles. You have chosen to lead with yourself, rather than your kink. You show wit and humor, as well no little depth. (Special needs kids? Chopin? Loves dogs? I'm all melty. You're bound to melt a few others, I'll wager.)

It doesn't bother me that your interests list lacks levels of your experience. I don't bother with my experience levels. I mean, who cares that I'm an expert fine diner or art gallery enthusiast? As much experience as I have in other arenas, I don't care to tell to the rest of the community. That is for me and mine to discuss. Each to their own, yes?

Best luck!

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