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kittenheels43 -> Remember to breathe... (5/29/2012 11:11:53 AM)

A poem about that churning heart sinking, can't breathe, want to cry feeling you get when you think you may be in deep doo-doo when as He says, 'your mouth has been cashing cheques your ass cannot cash'

the areas in italics are meant to be read in a rush, it is meant to be somewhat disjointed, because that is how it feels

Remember to breathe

Take a deep breath to steady your nerve
Straighten your back, hands on thighs,
Don’t frown, don’t glare, don’t narrow those eyes
Look Him square in the face.

And breathe…

Defiance is pointless
It amuses Him
He reads it the moment you feel it,
and you know by His smile…

And your heart skips a beat and your mouth turns dry
And you can’t hold His gaze, how ever you try


Remember to breathe…

Soft laughter, your discomfort is plain
He watches you struggle…
He whispers your name

His words are electric, they light up your day, they brighten your night
They shatter your soul and make it all right


Its hard to breathe

When your heart's in your mouth
And your tummy is churning
And Master is watching
The lesson you’re learning.


Stay calm
And just breathe

Your shoulders are shaking, and you’re almost in tears
You need His approval, to banish your fears
And He looks into your eyes, and whispers your name
He strokes your cheek, and soothes the pain
And says you’re a good girl
And you are happy again.

and you breathe.




kittenheels43 -> RE: Remember to breathe... (5/29/2012 11:15:37 AM)

be gentle, that was my first ever attempt at poetry, lmao




Mistresspennymae -> RE: Remember to breathe... (5/29/2012 12:13:45 PM)

What fun is 'gentle' little kitten?!

Very well done.




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