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Patience - 8/3/2012 4:15:14 PM   
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Tap, tap, tap.

It was the sound of her forehead as her head rocked forward, meeting the bars of the small cage that confined her, in rhythm with the clock that hung somewhere in the darkness enfolding her.

She had tried to keep track of time, failed; felt around her trap, but nothing was there. She had nothing but her thoughts, and -

"Obedience is rewarded; punishment will be swift and cruel."

The monotone voice spoke out from time to time. It was a recording, the hiss and click of the tape was audible. It didn't seem to follow any pattern she could discern. Other phrases spat out from the darkness as well:

"Fucking slut."

"You are safe here, only you can cause harm to yourself."

"Drink what you are given, and be thankful."

Other times, the recording was the sound of her own cries and whimpers played back to her, from moments when her captor came to visit. He would tell her she was wet. He would make her wet, and then he would hurt her. He fed her at times with a spoon while she sat, or would press her face into her dish and call her a dog.

He was the only one who came to visit. Everything else was fading, and she clung desperately to her memories. She didn't want to be trapped here, left alone; and hated herself for fawning and grovelling when he arrived.

If she didn't, though, he might not come back for a long time.

If she didn't, he might not come back at all.

She felt her forehead, where the welt rose from tapping it against the cold, unyielding metal. He was right. The only one who truly hurt her, was herself.

A moan spat itself gutterally from her throat.

"Fuck."

She did not want this

DID not want this

DID NOT

She was pounding her head against the bars again.

The last time, she had said no to him. He wanted her to say things she could not bring herself to say. He had thrown her food away and left her to her hunger.

Her body was wracked with sobs. She hated him. She was desperately hungry.

When would he return?

She gritted her teeth, and the words croaked out.

"I am nothing but what you want. I will do what you want."

Only the ticking of the clock echoed back to her.

"WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU WANT?!" She curled into a ball and the sobbing overwhelmed her, took her breath. She felt herself passing out, and let her consciousness slip away.

When she awoke, she was bound to the table he used sometimes, by wrist and ankle. He was softly wiping her forehead with a cool compress.

He pressed a spoon to her lips and she took it in eagerly. The oatmeal was bland, but her mouth watered and she ate hungrily.

He spoke, quietly.

"Was that so bad?"

She was too tired to cry. She limply shook her head. When he didn't respond, she realized he couldn't see her in the darkness.

"No," she murmured.

"Will you say it again?" His voice was still soft, quiet, almost hypnotic.

A ragged breath passed her lips, and she coughed.

"I....I am nothing. But what you want."

He waited. She knew he waited for it. In a dull tone she added, "I will do what you want."

"Good," he murmured, and fed her another spoonful. She ate it quickly.

"Now, we may begin."


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RE: Patience - 8/4/2012 12:11:05 PM   
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Wowsers. This is incredibly intriguing. More please!

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RE: Patience - 8/4/2012 6:25:46 PM   
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Um yes, more please...for Poise's interests, I am merely a bystander. *wink wink*
It was just getting good!!

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RE: Patience - 8/4/2012 7:36:18 PM   
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Well since you asked nicely, here you go. I can't promise to update this regularly, but I will make an effort to. (Life creeps in the way at times.) Please offer any comments or criticisms; all are appreciated. I will also entertain suggestions, though I cannot say I will carry them out. There is nothing lost through effort, though.

For your pleasure, then.

* * * * *

Her continued to feed her small spoonfuls, keeping the spoon in her mouth a moment after each morsel was done, easing it out gently. He did not tease her but simply fed her, quietly, intimate. When the last bit was gone he resumed tending to the ugly welt that marred her forehead.

She watched his every move, tensing without meaning to, expecting him to say more. He did not.

When he set the compress aside, folding it neatly, near the bowl from which he had fed her, he smiled down at her. The gesture made her flinch. It set a deep cold stab of fear in her gut.

He did speak, then. "I have tended to your wound. Fed you." He paused, and his lips parted as though to speak again. He did not.

"Thank you." Her voice was still dull, limp, even as her body flinched again at her own words. He smiled and nodded his head, and warmth ran through her, accompanied with nausea.

"This is the beginning." He stood, fixing his eyes on hers, though her naked body lay prone and uncovered. "Basic appreciation. From that, all things may grow." He reached behind her, pressing a raised firm pillow under her head. He had done this before. She knew what would happen next, and regretted her words twofold.

Seeing recognition in her eyes, he chuckled. Still staring into her eyes, he reached down and opened his trousers, letting them fall to reveal the erection beneath. He fondled himself with one hand.

"This is not a punishment," he told her. She closed her eyes, feeling the sting of tears forming. He kept talking. "This is a choice. You know what is expected.

Drink what you are given, and be thankful."

She shook her head, the tears flowing freely now. She felt his gaze and tried to will herself to stop, but her chest wrenched and a sobbing moan came from her.

"You will drink," he assured her. "One thing or another. Which will it be? I give you the choice, but if you do not accept my offer, I shall choose for you."

The last time he had pissed over her face, splashing hot, smelling sickly sweet and acrid. She had clamped her mouth shut but he had pulled her hair, and in the end, she drank.

It was filthy. Humiliating. Yet giving him the satisfaction of not accepting the other choice let her stomach and conscience agree.

She did not want this, did not want...

She sensed his hand moving towards her, knowing it would grab her hair, and she murmured.

"No. Please."

He was rubbing himself faster now. Trembling, she opened her eyes with a pleading look. His cock was harder, the tip reddening.

She opened her mouth.

He leaned in closer. Her head pressed back into the pillow. This was not what she wanted, but she could not take the humiliation again. Her mouth stayed open.

He pressed closer still, until she could smell his musk, saw his precum, and knew he would finish soon. Trying not to shake, she let her tongue poke out. Let him finish and be done with it.

His body shook and he spoke in his quiet voice, coupled with a hiss, "Yes. You understand. Good. Drink, drink it all..."

The thick cum shot warm and heavy over her tongue, into her mouth. It had a salty taste. She forced her jaw to stay open, until the last string dripped down onto her neck. She kept her eyes on his as she pressed her mouth shut and swallowed hard, ridding herself of the taste as quickly as she could.

His arms shook slightly as he pulled his trousers up, covered his cock as it hung down, still half hard. He smiled widely down at her.

"You made a choice that pleases me, and so as you said to me, I will say to you: thank you." His fingers drew a caress across her cheek, and she shuddered.

"Basic consideration," he murmured. "I will not use the chloroform again; you need to keep your food down. I will let you fall asleep on your own. You will be in the cage again when you wake, and have time to consider the choice you made here, and the things we have shared.

I will return then, and we will continue. This is only one step upon a long road."

He turned from her and the lights went out. She was left shackled to the table in the dark, his words in her head because nothing else would enter her mind.

She listened to his fading footsteps, and she quietly cried herself to sleep.

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RE: Patience - 8/5/2012 9:41:48 AM   
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More please.

I like, I like.

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