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Audrey and Kate - 8/17/2012 3:34:59 PM   
MrBlue76


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I wrote this some time ago. When I was about to publish it here I realized how much it needed to be proofread - I'm not a native spanish speaker - so I accepted the help offered very nicely by @Pandapet, who has done the proofreading for this. Thanks a lot, Pandapet ;)

Audrey and Kate

“So… what was that?”
“What was what”
“In the restaurant, with the waitress. You were quite rude.”
“She’s always like that with every guy who comes in.”
“She was only being nice.”
“No way. I’ve been a waitress. I was nice, she acts slutty for tips. There’s a difference. I have seen her do it so many times.”
“Come here”

She left the bags on the table and approached him, as asked.

“So…”
“So… You were rude with her because you thought she was being slutty with me.” He held her chin, closely inspecting her eyes. She noticed the subtle change of his tone.
Squirming under his grasp, she defended herself. “It’s not with you, she does it with everyone.”
“But it’s when she does it with me when it bothers you.”
“Well, you are my partner.”
“So you can be slutty with me…” he emphasized the “you” by grasping her chin and raising her face towards his, “but not any others.”
“That’s - well, that’s logical!”
“What about Audrey?”
“I’m Audrey!”
“No, you are Kate. The girl that was so rude to the waitress was Kate, too. Audrey would have stopped when I asked her to, but you continued.”
“C’mon, that’s not fair.” She tried to get a caress from the hand holding her chin, but he didn’t budge, and raised her face an inch higher.
“What’s not fair?”
She looked down as his hand loosened and replied sheepishly,“That you are going to punish me for that.”
“Oh, so you think I’m going to punish you.” A smirk played on his lips.
“ I don’t know.”
“ I wouldn’t like to contradict you today, since you seem to be in such a strong mood.”
Kate kept her gaze downward and remained silent. He moved his mouth to her ear, and whispered intensely “Get naked, now.”

She did as she was told in silence. In less than a minute she stood in the middle of the living room, looking down and waiting.

“Well, seems like Audrey is taking charge, don’t you think?”

She shrugged. He was the one who always decided when she was Kate or Audrey, but today he seemed to be in a playful mood about the role. She was thoroughly confused and let the silence answer his question.

“So you are much better than the slutty waitress, hm?”
“I didn’t say that, I just…” He cut her off before she could further defend herself.
“You said that you didn’t do that when you worked as a waitress and you called her a slut.”
“I said she acted slutty.”
“Like you now? Getting naked in a snap?” His tone mocked her slightly, walking slowly around her once to make her nervous.
“With you, not with anyone.”

He smiled, amused by the insecure tone betrayed by her answers.

“Maybe she does the same with her partner… gets naked just when he tells her to. Or maybe she doesn’t. Maybe she’s more dominant in bed. What do you think?”
“I don’t know, and I don’t care. Her not thrusting her silicone boobs in your face every time she serves you coffee is all I care about.
“Oh, I see we have Kate here again.”
“C’mon, please…”
“Do you think that slutty waitress accepts slaps in the face from her partner like you do?” She squirmed in her place and blushed, remaining silent. “And that it turns her on as much as it turns you on? Because I would say that is quite slutty.”
“No,” she replied, keeping her gaze downward
“And do you think she crawls around naked like you do?”
“No, I don’t think so.” She began to see his point and became bolder in her answer.
“Begging for cock like you do?”

She tried to imagine the waitress in such a state, but she couldn’t picture it. Certainly, she couldn’t imagine the waitress doing that. She shook her head no.

“So then, who is more slutty?”
“I am, but…” He shushed her with a single finger over her lips.
“See? There’s Kate again. There are no ‘but’s here. What do you say, Audrey? Should we send Kate away so she stops bothering us?

She didn’t reply, but thought to herself that it would be a sweet relief. For some reason he was purposefully keeping her on the edge and seemed to be enjoying it.

“I’m Kate,” she stated in a challenging tone
“I can solve that.”

He swiftly slapped across her cheek. Sudden, not violent, not even painful, but it left her breathless for a second.

“Did that help?”

She didn’t reply, only continued to look down. It had helped a little. Kate was somewhere inside her, still holding enough sway to keep her from answering. A second face slap came, though this one was expected. She inhaled and exhaled slowly and deeply.

“Better now?”
“Yes.”
“And Kate?”
“Gone.”
“Good.”

He walked to the couch, leaving her there in the middle of the room.

“A bit of a shame, though. I could have found use for her experience as a former waitress serving drinks. Why don’t you bring me a beer, Audrey?”

She had expected something different - a touch, a kiss, maybe even another slap. After a second, however, she complied and walked into the kitchen. He watched her walk off in a bit of a huff, admiring the view of backside as she left. She fetched a bottle of beer, opened it, and handed it to him.

“Wow. See what I mean? No glass.That’s when Kate would have been more of us to me than you, dear. I don’t know what you were thinking.”

She wordlessly went back to the kitchen and came back with a large beer glass.

“Thanks, leave it on the table .” To her frustration, he then proceeded to sip directly from the bottle. “Now you really look like a very slutty waitress, don’t you think? Serving beers naked.”
“I don’t know.”
“Yes you do, I can tell. Now, we are going to have to solve the issue of Kate being rude with people when I clearly tell her not to.”

He stood up, gripping her by the scalp. “Down, girl” as his hand directed her downward and she slowly complied. “On all fours, dear.” She obeyed and remained on her hands and knees, waiting.

“Of course, it wasn’t your fault. We both know that. It was that arrogant Kate. But since you both share that beautiful body, maybe we can find a way to punish her. what do you think?
“I don’t…”

He cut her off with a hard smack to her bottom. The momentum pushed her forward, but he immediately corrected her position by yanking her hair from behind.

“Relax dear. Just remember that you are not the one being punished here, it’s that pesky Kate.”

He then landed a second and third blow with his bare hand. Each slap was harder and more painful than the last.

“We need Kate to remember this the next time she sits, don’t you think?”

He spanked her twicemore before she could answer. She wondered if it wasn’t hurting his hand as well. If it is, he wasn’t showing it, because the spanks hit one after the other. All the while he still maintained a grip on her hair, forcing her to look up and arch her back, her ass sticking out.

“Do you think she’ll remember that, Audrey?”
Her bottom stung by now and she was sure it would be sore the following day. “I think so.”
“Good girl. Do you think that Kate will behave like a lady the next time we go there?”
“She will.”
“And will she be polite to that waitress, even if she thinks the waitress is acting slutty?”

She took a few seconds to formulate a response, as a flash of pride showed across her face. He observed as much, and spanked her harder than before.

“She will, she will! Please…”
“Good girl. Seems like we have both worked on quieting that arrogant Kate, don’t you think?

Once more, she didn’t reply. She remained on all fours, contemplating her aching bottom.

“I believe I deserve a reward for helping you. On your knees, facing me.”
She silently obeyed. Without being told, she unzipped his pants and freed his bulging cock.

“That’s what’s so great about you, Audrey, you always know how to please me. But don’t tell Kate, she gets stupidly jealous sometimes.”

She enveloped his cock with her mouth, repeating the movements that she knew he loved the most. He whispered “Good girl…” and allowed her to serve him that way for a few minutes. He then decided he needed her body. Without a word, he pushed her to her feet, led her to the bedroom, and gently shoved her onto the bed. She fell forward on all fours, just as he had intended. Throughout this process, she allowed him to guide her with aroused and ashamed docility and renewed submission.

He climbed behind her onto the bed, fondling and caressing her curves. He whispered fervidly in her ear about the slutty waitress waiting to be fucked, about the arrogant Kate, and about the pleasing and shameless Audrey. She was then easily taken without resistance. It was an act which Kate would have found to be humiliating, but Audrey relished it like a tamed and defeated animal that enjoys being fed by its strict, yet loving owner.

The End

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I'm not a native english speaker. So, if I'm writing very stupid things, the reason behind it can be:
1.- That I'm having problems with the language, and translation
2.- That, simply, I'm writing very stupid things
Give me the benefit of doubt!
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