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culareD -> Sub space (8/23/2012 9:46:14 AM)

Hi all,

In my quest to learn more about this scene, I did some more research and wrote a poem. Please note: I have never been to this place I wrote about, so I am checking for it's accuracy.

As a "newbie", I have been challenged with trying to understand what it is exactly that I want. I wanted a way to communicate it...I would also like to know if you think this would be appropriate to put in my profile or journals...Is it too much information?

Thanks in advance ~ culare'd

Subspace ~ culare'd

The mystery of this place,
Do I dare inquire?
More than just a curiosity,
A deep innate desire.

Take me to this sacred place,
Teach me how to fly.
Somewhere like euphoria,
I will not challenge why.

Sweet torment and stinging pain,
Endorphin rush ensues.
Still in a state of consciousness,
That space, it still eludes.

A beautiful leap in threshold,
Crisis, I think not!
Panting relief, reaching 1, 2, 3
The trail to sub is hot!

Altered state is evidence,
Compliant and submissive now.
Tolerant moan of ecstasy,
Headspace has been found.

Bottom in a beautiful scene,
Pleasure is overflowing.
Calming, actualized, subspace,
Trust in Him is glowing.

Body limp, in a happy place,
Relaxing care of a gentle Top,
The comfort of His caring presence,
My sweet submission will never stop.




chemeli -> RE: Sub space (8/23/2012 10:26:39 AM)

i think it would be fine on a profile. It's beautiful and everything that helps knowing you better is positif. :)




OsideGirl -> RE: Sub space (8/23/2012 10:41:27 AM)

I would think that it's fine to put in your profile or journal.....as long as you're comfortable discussing it, because people will make comments and pose questions about it.




GreedyTop -> RE: Sub space (8/23/2012 11:33:41 AM)

to me, I could not relate to the poem at all. I can't pinpoint exactly why, though. I HAVE been into 'subspace', but I guess mine isn't flavored that way.


the poem is good for a journal, though, I suppose.




pinkbtmwoman -> RE: Sub space (8/23/2012 5:51:22 PM)

I'm "new" also and love the poem and imagery. It reflects what I imagine when I think of "subspace" and what it might be like. If I had your gift for writing, I would post it. Good luck and hope you find it!







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