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poem about subspace - 8/27/2012 11:05:14 AM

culareD

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Hi all,

This is a poem I wrote the other day in an attempt to research and understand "subspace"...I DID post it on another forum just to ask some of those with more experience if they thought it would be an appropriate poem for a profile...My intention is not to cross post, but to just share.

Subspace ~ culare’d

The mystery of this place,
Do I dare inquire?
More than just a curiosity,
A deep innate desire.

Take me to this sacred place,
Teach me how to fly.
Somewhere like euphoria,
I will not challenge why.

Sweet torment and stinging pain,
Endorphin rush ensues.
Still in a state of consciousness,
That space, it still eludes.

A beautiful leap in threshold,
Crisis, I think not!
Panting relief, reaching 1, 2, and 3
The trail to sub is hot!

Altered state is evidence,
Compliant and submissive now.
Tolerant moan of ecstasy,
Headspace has just been found.

Bottom in a beautiful scene,
Pleasure is overflowing.
Calming, actualized, subspace,
Trust in Him is glowing.

Body limp, in a happy place,
Relaxing words of a gentle Top,
The comfort of His caring presence,
My sweet submission will never stop.

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