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SilverGentleman -> Thought I'd get some input on a poem I've had sitting around. (9/13/2012 8:41:31 PM)

I've posted this in my journal and elsewhere. I hope you enjoy it, and I generally welcome most feedback. Thanks.

A Dom's Musings, Part 1
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Thoughts are swirling
Head is whirling
The strings that bind us
All unfurling

Whips are cracking
Wounds are bleeding
Tears are falling
Lusts are feeding

Hand comes down
Muscles contract
She cries out
With each impact

She's gone blind
And now she's deaf
I've taken her senses
Only feeling is left

The trickling of sweat
Down her brow and her back
The pain of my strikes
Are a matter of fact

Her arms in rope
Bound tight and high
More cords now wind
From ankle to thigh

Keeping her balance
Is a struggle at best
"Stay on your toes!"
I remind her in jest

My little play thing
My little toy
I'll make your soul
Tremble in joy

Nails hot as ice
Trail over her flesh
Where I will strike next
Is anyone's guess

Dangle my pretty
Stuggle my dear
Though you're afraid
You have nothing to fear

"Have mercy on me!"
In tears you cry out
My love is a mercy
You cannot live without.




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