Wake from your Everlasting Dream

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NightMeow -> Wake from your Everlasting Dream (9/19/2012 7:11:34 AM)
In are hearts we feel the beat of life now we must dance to that beat. life is alway like a dance so i just say grab a gun and go with it you life is already set on its golden path to true hell or true success. Sorry if this is true but welcome to true reality for i am your guide that will open your eyes to what is truly around you stand strong stand tall for all will be real very soon

MistressDarkArt -> RE: Wake from your Everlasting Dream (9/19/2012 10:48:55 AM)
You seriously need an editor. Between the unnecessary bold font, lack of punctuation, spelling, formatting and grammar I've not a clue what you're talking about. But thanks for posting and hope you enjoy your day job.

emeraldgryphon -> RE: Wake from your Everlasting Dream (9/19/2012 11:29:48 AM)
Grab a gun? And you're supposed to be a guide? To what - police-assisted suicide?

NightMeow -> RE: Wake from your Everlasting Dream (9/23/2012 9:08:46 AM)
lol you guys dont get it lol its just a poem and also i suffer from some shit so i cant spell very well ya dicks pick on a disabled person and his writing hope ya have a laugh lol

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