RemoteUser
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ORIGINAL: AAkasha Since this kind of request is common but often "hidden" in other veiled attempts acting like it's for information, maybe you could indulge us an instead give the femdoms some fodder material and send us something to "wank off" to. But before you write anything about a latex clad dominatrix with a strap on and focus on all the typically male-obsessive angles, focus instead on things that are likely less enjoyable for you to write, but probably more appealing to your femdom audience, so we know it's not self indulgent. For example: 1 - Two men tying each other up for the pleasure of their dominant partner. She is not present in the story, so no need to describe her or her body or sexuality. 2 - Fan fic: Eric and Bill from True Blood in a bondage/sex dream - surprise us regarding who is the "top". Make it realistic. 3 - A 100% solo piece about waking up bound & gagged by a man, not a woman - focus on fear, surrender, helplessness and the desire for freedom and uncertainty about your captor and his intent, and how objectified you feel. Can't wait! Akasha I have been itching to write with no inspiration. This stuff sounds new to me, maybe fun, so I thought I'd give it a shot. Tell me if it's any good. If you like it I'll continue it in Creative Writings. * * * * * Fuck. Pain right between my eyes, like the butt end of a screwdriver pressing down, swinging, CRACK... Everything's black. What the fuck? Can't move my arms, they're asleep. Legs won't move either. Something stinks, vinegar and burnt rubber. Smell makes me want to puke, but it's hard enough to breathe... Where the fuck am I? Everything changes from black to bright, and that pain between my eyes spikes like the business end of the screwdriver decided to play. Dust covers my face, fills my lungs and I try to retch, but all that happens is a wheeze and a huge inhale of that fucking horrible vinegar-rubber smell. It's thick, fills my mouth like I'm drinking it, and I try to cough through the dust. "Morning, Paul." My eyes snap open despite that brightness. I don't know who the voice belongs to, but I've heard that oil in his voice before. It's the friendly, howdy-partner, I'm talking nice but you just fell into a puddle of pig shit...and I'm going to push you down deeper. I've used it before myself, but I've never been on the receiving end. Just who the fuck does this prick think he is? I try to respond and gag instead. Light and dust and vinegar-rubber have a lock on my head and chest. Suddenly I'm up in the air. Fucker must have grabbed me, but I didn't even feel it. I spin, see a glimpse of fluffy white clouds and a brilliant blue. Then I hit the ground, face down, and gag on more dust. I hear crunching sounds and manage to tilt my head, enough to see brown leather boots shuffling towards me. "Don't worry, I'm not mad you don't say hi back. You don't even know who I am anyhow." That oil is congealing. Motherfucker. I try to look up past the boots and light sears my eyes. "Don't bother trying to get up. Those arms and legs of yours, they won't be working for a while, Paul." He leans over me and I feel a few small, sharp stabs in my shoulders and hips. "There, all topped up. You won't be moving for another two, three hours. Doxacurium chloride, Paul, it's lovely stuff. Used to be expensive, before it was pulled from the market. Now people can't wait to unload it, and they hardly got buyers, because who needs paralytics outside of the hospitals and the military?" A weight, barely noticeable but for the sound, taps my shoulder. "We're going to have a little chat, Paul. Just you and me, man to man. Then I have a few things to do. We've got a few things to clear up, just some man talk, and then..." Then what?? I try to yell at him but all that comes out is a whimper. "Then, we'll see." Something falls by my face in the dust. It's a bulging bag that lands with the sound of jarred metal. * * * * * Author's Note: makes you wonder what's in the bag, doesn't it?
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