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Eyes closed shut - 11/4/2004 2:35:23 PM   
blushes4u


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You are there, your presence is there, it is all that i need
When things go wrong, i need you there to make things right
To have you there to make me safe...sane
To bring out whats inside my very being day and night.

When I cry , your arms comfort me and you smile
Your caresses bring me to life and i forget my despair
Your kisses hot with passion, bring me over the edge
You do things to me that no other would even dare.

I feel your body tower over me, impaling my inner soul
And I shiver with ecstacy, as pass my lips, echos the satisfying moan.
I follow as you guide me, each day a new adventure ensues
As we explore all aspects of life and the unknown.

~~~
Just something i wrote and hopes to become a reality some day...this was done as someone suggested ...with my eyes closed and my words flowing.
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RE: Eyes closed shut - 11/4/2004 5:49:04 PM   
theroebabe


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That was beautiful thank you for sharing!

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RE: Eyes closed shut - 11/4/2004 9:03:38 PM   
TaurusMCMLVIII


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wonderful use of words that expose your feelings and create great images

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RE: Eyes closed shut - 11/10/2004 10:44:28 PM   
Devra


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How expressional and meaningful.. it touched me.

devra

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