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A Time Of Wanting - 12/18/2012 10:21:09 PM

MzWhipplash

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A Time Of wanting

A time of wanting
A time of being wan- ted
A time of wishes made
A time of wishes broken in time
- Broken in time
Tears uncried or cried 'til dry
Broken hearts and minds sigh
While Christmas lights dance
And then a burst of loving hugs
Dished out like hot steaming food on a bitter cold day
With mucking out horses and watching them play
Back inside for a wee dram or snifter to warm the heart
To cheer the soul and ease that part
That part that stays nestled in someone elses heart
Still held close when the sender has drifted far
Far into the dark where boys scream in pleasurable pain
Where I hold his mind and keep him sane
Where fears do dread like Tigeress paws
And cherished surrender gleams My applause
The Sadist bitch with a loving heart
With loving touch that drives him to start
To start, to give, to crave My favour
So he gives with gleaming eyes, and in My hand My Tazaar.
And he knows what's to come that burn that light
The screaming agony of delight
So my thoughts drift back to the Tree
And all who wait expectantly for Me.

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RE: A Time Of Wanting - 12/19/2012 5:09:50 AM

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Very nicely done, with elegant imagery.

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RE: A Time Of Wanting - 12/19/2012 11:26:39 PM

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Thank you. I like to mix everyday and like a marble cake. Blended yet distinctive flavour it is.

I have much poetry and prose on Fetlife.com

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RE: A Time Of Wanting - 11/15/2013 10:28:49 AM

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Very evocative :) and I noticed the Tigeress analogy again :)

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RE: A Time Of Wanting - 11/15/2013 10:35:36 AM

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Per the guidelines of the forums: Please do not resurrect threads that are more than three months old. If you wish to continue a conversation, please start a new thread with a link to the old one.

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