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Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:07:01 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		Anyone have any thoughts or constructive criticism's for my profile? Just wondering.

Thanks in advance

C
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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:17:23 PM   
Level


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Status: offline 		It shouldn't be done in invisible ink?

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Skinned up knees and salty lips
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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:21:45 PM   
TieMeInKnottss


Posts: 1944
Joined: 9/6/2012
Status: offline 		You may want o be a little more descriptive on what you want... I understand not wanting to put it all out there but you need to bait the hook.. My "thing" today is what will you provide her (I have a question posted on ask a master :) because I have become curious)

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:23:00 PM   
TheLilSquaw


Posts: 2340
Joined: 10/24/2012
From: Middle River, MD
Status: offline 		If you have tons of pictures, why not post one that isn't blurry?

How do you know the road to a strangers ultimate please?
IMO your profile reads like a do me dom.

It only talks about play, which will turn a lot of subs/slaves off.
Typically women want to see something about YOU the man.
They want to know that you have some common ground outside the bedroom.
What do you enjoy outside of kink?
It's not about listing the world as you put it.



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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:26:36 PM   
Level


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Status: offline 		Hmm. When I click on their name, nothing comes up.

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Let go it's harder holding on
One more trip and I'll be gone

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:26:45 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		-- tie me, working onit.

=lilsquaw

what is a do me dom?

So i should talk a little bit more about the pain i can inflict?

quote:

ORIGINAL: TheLilSquaw

If you have tons of pictures, why not post one that isn't blurry?

How do you know the road to a strangers ultimate please?
IMO your profile reads like a do me dom.

It only talks about play, which will turn a lot of subs/slaves off.
Typically women want to see something about YOU the man.
They want to know that you have some common ground outside the bedroom.
What do you enjoy outside of kink?
It's not about listing the world as you put it.





< Message edited by ccc3333 -- 12/27/2012 5:27:10 PM >

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:27:10 PM   
OhRose


Posts: 28
Joined: 5/15/2012
From: Canada - Living in England
Status: offline 		1) Maybe try uploading a photo that wasn't taken using a trout.

2) Add something about your hobbies, interests outside of all your sexual prowess.

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:28:03 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		On the photo, I was trying different photo's and now i can't get to uploading more... so the site is malfunctioning..

Yes i am adding hobbies and such aswe speak :)
quote:

ORIGINAL: OhRose

1) Maybe try uploading a photo that wasn't taken with using a trout.

2) Add something about your hobbies, interests outside of all your sexual prowess.



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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:29:43 PM   
TheLilSquaw


Posts: 2340
Joined: 10/24/2012
From: Middle River, MD
Status: offline
quote:

ORIGINAL: ccc3333

-- tie me, working onit.

=lilsquaw

what is a do me dom?

So i should talk a little bit more about the pain i can inflict?



do me dom is a dom who is all about HIM and his kink...
It's about him getting off.

I think you should talk more about YOU.
The man, not the kink not the dom.
What do you enjoy outside of kink.

This is someone's 1st impression of you.


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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:33:18 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		Thank you, will have it done in about 20 min .
quote:

ORIGINAL: TheLilSquaw


quote:

ORIGINAL: ccc3333

-- tie me, working onit.

=lilsquaw

what is a do me dom?

So i should talk a little bit more about the pain i can inflict?



do me dom is a dom who is all about HIM and his kink...
It's about him getting off.

I think you should talk more about YOU.
The man, not the kink not the dom.
What do you enjoy outside of kink.

This is someone's 1st impression of you.



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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:37:13 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		how about now?

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:44:21 PM   
poise


Posts: 9509
Joined: 7/3/2010
Status: offline 		I like the updated list of pictures, especially the ..... Hey! Where did it go!?
Darn it, you must be changing them all out as I type this. No fair!

I like the line question is will you let me drive, and find it rather hot,
but I feel it's kind of presumptuous of you to state that you "already know
the road to my ultimate pleasures", when you don't even know me.
It feels like you're lumping every slave and submissive together, as though
what might please one should surely please them all.


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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:47:15 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
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Status: offline 		Lol poise which picture was it?

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:48:56 PM   
littlewonder


Posts: 15659
Status: offline 		Get rid of the mirror photo of your back.

Delete the dom scowl picture. Looks like you're trying to have a bowel movement or you're really angry at someone.


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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:49:37 PM   
TheLilSquaw


Posts: 2340
Joined: 10/24/2012
From: Middle River, MD
Status: offline 		I don't see any changes in the context of your profile.
Perhaps you haven't changed it.



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Lifestyle & ProSwitch
Fetish Model, Producer, and Website Owner

http://www.clips4sale.com/69201
http://www.kinkbomb.com/studio/Sadistic_Babygirl_

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:52:14 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		i did change the context...

talked quite a bit about my likes and things i do in the "vanilla" life

quote:

ORIGINAL: TheLilSquaw

I don't see any changes in the context of your profile.
Perhaps you haven't changed it.




Back picture coming down... haha the scowl is interesting though, do i really have to smile?

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:57:55 PM   
poise


Posts: 9509
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Status: offline 		It was the "scowl" picture I liked best actually, and I see it up clearly now.
You do see how this could be a frustrating exercise for you though, yes?
Every woman is going to have a different opinion than the next one.
Making sure you have a balance of kink and vanilla interests is probably
the best advice you'll get, and in which most women will agree.

< Message edited by poise -- 12/27/2012 5:58:38 PM >

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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 5:59:38 PM   
littlewonder


Posts: 15659
Status: offline 		Personally if I was looking for someone...yup. I want someone who is happy. If I see a scowl, the first thing I'm gonna think is he's an unhappy man or he thinks that to be a dom he has to be cold and angry, neither of which I find attractive.


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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 6:00:18 PM   
ccc3333


Posts: 156
Joined: 12/24/2012
Status: offline 		Point taken, i have 100's of pics so... ill try 2 others and u vote for which 1.

Thanks
quote:

ORIGINAL: littlewonder

Personally if I was looking for someone...yup. I want someone who is happy. If I see a scowl, the first thing I'm gonna think is he's an unhappy man or he thinks that to be a dom he has to be cold and angry, neither of which I find attractive.



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RE: Criticism for my profile... - 12/27/2012 6:01:58 PM   
littlewonder


Posts: 15659
Status: offline 		That's up to you. Poise said she likes it. so maybe keep it and post at least another one of you with at least a fun or smiling look.


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