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Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 3:56:46 PM

dh76513

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It is very sad that most submissives girls never read your words muchless your profile.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 3:58:32 PM

OsideGirl

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Yeah, neither do most men.

Welcome to the forums.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 3:59:49 PM

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It's also sad when people do not read forum descriptions.
People not reading profiles is not gender thing.

Anyways... Welcome to the forums.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 4:06:10 PM

DarkSteven

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Fella, don't worry. Your profile will not garner you any interest.

Lemme just mention a couple of salient points:

1. A Master is a rare bird. He engenders respect from all.
2. You NEVER call a woman a whore or a slut unless she's yours. That's covered in Dom 020.

With that said, welcome to the forums, and feel free to ask questions and learn.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 4:24:15 PM

Dreadmath

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Welcome from a fellow newbie ^^

People in general dislike reading. I personally blink several times when I see a wall of text then try to decide if this is possibly interesting (hint:coin toss). Most of the time I end up skipping it. Here are some suggestions to make your profile more reader friendly:

-Do not put everything: People just want a summary of what your mode of operation is (single? looking for X? In Y stage?) then a bit about who you are(Job description, location, interests) and perhaps something about how to approach you (Expected etiquette, preferred form of contact).

-Split your profile in autonomous paragraphs: Generally this makes the text less intimidating and enables some primitive form of indexing. Also it makes editing your profile easier.

And don't despair if you don't find a person you are into or who is into you, these things take time.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 5:10:08 PM

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 7:00:18 PM

MistressDarkArt

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Welcome to the discussion side, DH. I agree totally with DarkSteven about your use of the words 'sluts' and 'whores' in your profile. Some women might enjoy being called this IF they become established in a relationship with you. Until/unless that happens, it's likely most women will find it offensive coming from someone they don't know so you might want to tone that down. Along those same lines, I would not be calling women on this site 'girls'; it's very disrespectful. I think the rest of your profile narrative is good.

Re: people responding without reading your profile: it's a common tactic here among males posing as women. Just something to ponder. Best of luck to you!

< Message edited by MistressDarkArt -- 1/11/2013 7:14:06 PM >

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/11/2013 7:18:18 PM

ResidentSadist

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quote:

ORIGINAL: DarkSteven
Fella, don't worry. Your profile will not garner you any interest.

Lemme just mention a couple of salient points:

1. A Master is a rare bird. He engenders respect from all.
2. You NEVER call a woman a whore or a slut unless she's yours. That's covered in Dom 020.

With that said, welcome to the forums, and feel free to ask questions and learn.

To the OP,
In 25 words per paragraph, tell:

who you are
what you offer a relationship
what you want from a relationship
who you are looking for

Respect the readers of your profile. Steven is much kinder than I am. I would not even read your profile because it was a wall of text and very disrespectful to anyone trying to sort it out.

Good luck and welcome aboard.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/12/2013 12:31:15 AM

ashjor911

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Welcome To CM

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/12/2013 8:23:18 AM

SinFix

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I gotta ask about the part of your profile at the bottom that says.. "don't waste our time"... Does that mean you are in a relationship of some kind?

Oh, and welcome to the forums

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/12/2013 11:06:56 AM

DesFIP

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May I suggest you learn to use paragraphs? That massive wall of text will convince anyone not to read your profile.

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/12/2013 3:20:51 PM

iamar

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Welcome to the forum.

I have to say that after reading your profile, I can understand why some many find it a challenge to finish. There are no breaks to give the eyes a rest. It seems to go on and on. I know for myself anyone calling themselves a True master is someone I would consider foolish and not worth my time.

But I sincerely hope you find that intelligent slave girl that fits your wants and needs.

~i

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/12/2013 8:50:52 PM

TieMeInKnottss

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Welcome. I would have to say that, contrary to your statement, I always read profiles

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RE: Intelligent Slave Girl Wanted - 1/12/2013 9:02:35 PM

DomMeinCT

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quote:

ORIGINAL: dh76513

It is very sad that most submissives girls never read your words muchless your profile.

Welcome to CM.

It is very sad that some folks don't seek feedback on their profiles instead of first complaining about the people who don't read their words (possibly due to the profile).

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