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Master Teach Me - 11/10/2004 5:32:22 PM   
Devra


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Master Teach Me


Master, i need You to teach me, still i too have ideas of my own.
could i someday be the submissive You may someday need?

i will do as You say, as i need You to take control as you teach me.
i pray one day i am the submissive You see in me, that i can be.

i am complex, gentle and yes even caring, and not perfect.
Could i one day be that submissive You can trust.

Master i am flirtatious and playful, nevertheless i am very loyal.
i a new submissive, wonder often will one day You let me serve You totally.

i will obey as i desire to serve You, and need to one day kneel before You.
i am a shy submissive who longs and wonders why i have these emotions.

Master i long to pleasure You, and even feel the pain by the strike of Your hand.
i wonder will i be that Submissive You meet in person one day?

i long to kneel before You and submit to Your will.
Master could i be that submissive who You not seek but need in time..

this new submisisve she longs to serve and please You correctly.
Master do not give up on me, teach me and mold me, so i make You proud.

Master this pain i feel for You now, i think of You and my submission.
Even as i cry in pain, i try to express to You my feelings that are deep within me.

i will make mistakes and i know You will show me my wrong doings.
this new submissive will accept her punishments as well Your praise gladly.

Master as You teach me, and undo the wrongs that i have learned.
i pray in time, You see how much i am trying and need to meet You someday.

i promise to try my best to please and serve You as i kneel before You.
with Your guidance i know i will learn as i see a patient Master.



< Message edited by Devra -- 11/10/2004 6:04:40 PM >


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RE: Master Teach Me - 11/10/2004 7:01:14 PM   
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Thanks for sharing it was beautiful!




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RE: Master Teach Me - 11/16/2004 2:36:46 PM   
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well done
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RE: Master Teach Me - 12/24/2004 2:26:45 PM   
subspaced50


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Wow- great writing- you have a sense of letters. and understand protocol you are a proper girl -i hope you will one day write to me a fellow submissive, stuck up in Los Angeles- subspaced50

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RE: Master Teach Me - 12/24/2004 9:33:08 PM   
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Very Sweet and Delicious! I hope your Master knows that he is getting an awesome sub!

Mistress Dame Darkness

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