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ThereAreRoles -> First post. plus a short story (5/19/2013 1:39:53 AM)

Please keep in mind that I am not very good at this stuff or rather i lack experience in writing.

I felt scared. Blindfolded and facing a wall I can sense his presence near me. His steady and slow breathing gave me a indication of years of experience doing things like this. Before I knew it I felt his touch on my back. I jumped but he did not pull away.

One week ago Alice went online in search of remedy to this burning desires she had felt for nearly a decade. Becoming bored with her real life relationships and her day to day interactions with members of the male sex she yearned for something deeper and more powerful. She wanted to drown in seduction , lust and power of a man. Her search led her to an online classified board where such men existed. At first she could hardly contain her excitement the sudden materialization of a new door she could explore sent a chill up her spine and she experienced a feeling not felt for a long time. She instinctively reached down into her satin panties to find a hot sticky mess forming. Reality quickly slammed the new door shut as the classified filled with nothing more then pure brutality towards her sex. Lists of nothing more then over glorified pimps and abusers filled her screen and a sad realization that maybe she was truly the only one who felt this emotion. After an hour of endless reading she was all but ready to throw in the towel when one ad caught her eye.

To the women of the world:
Are you tired of the listless nights?
Are you missing something from your daily routine?
Have you conquered your world and found it trivial and boring?

I have your answer.

Alice intrigued saw the door cracked slightly open.

Seven days, fourteen emails and 2 phones calls was all it took for Alice to put her new high heels on squeeze into that red cocktail dress she had bought for her promotion dinner and spent what seemed an endless hour perfecting her makeup. She had turned herself into what society has taught her is the perfect mate, a made up doll designed to attracted the perfect genetic mate. Thirty five miles separated her from her online suitor and with every mile that her odometer turned she grew more excited yet fearful.

I need to ring that door bell but first I will straighten my dress and take one last look at my reflection in the decorative glass panel in the door. I reach for the boor bell and hear the chimes ring off, no turning back now for better or worse I will walk through that door.

Her mind was racing when she heard the lock turn, the door creaked and there stood a man, her man the one that had ensnared her senses and teases of a world she had only dreamed of. She smiled his expression never changed. He took 2 steps back and Alice stepped inside. Before she could even say one word he took her arm and spun her to face the wall a blindfold at the ready covered her eyes

His hand on her back she felt him slide upwards to her shoulder and down her slender smooth arm, his touch hot to the skin. Alice felt the zipper on the back of her dress press in and slowly down each click of the zipper like a boom of thunder in her mind. The feeling of draped silk falling off her body was soon replaced by a rush of cool air. Her nearly naked form would be enough for any man to take notice and rise but he hardly reacted.

“To simply say I want you would be a tremendous understatement”
he whispered in her ear.

The sound of his voice, his breath cutting across her ear sounded as if he was making slow passionate love.

“First I will make your body mine, that will be the easy part. You will bring pleasure to me that you only dreamed a women can bring to a man, your mind will follow and you will spend your days thinking only of how much you wish to please me, your heart will be next and you will know what love is for the first time in your life and when I posses your body, mind, and your heart your very being will be mine and I will truly own you.”

Her knees where trembling her head spinning and she wanted to fall but he held her up. She felt his arms warping around her frame pressing her tighter against him.

“shall we begin Alice”




Craftsman -> RE: First post. plus a short story (5/20/2013 5:01:24 PM)

A very nice start.

Will you continue?




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