dcnovice
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ORIGINAL: DarkSteven So the man who knows you best tells you your writing needs work, but one professor who gave you As validates you not doing anything to improve? Perhaps your writing is excellent when given an overall structure to work within, but your writing is difficult to follow here. And all caps is rude. Although in your third and fourth line, it sounded like a Cher song. "Half my life is an act of revision.” ― John Irving
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No matter how cynical you become, it's never enough to keep up. JANE WAGNER, THE SEARCH FOR SIGNS OF INTELLIGENT LIFE IN THE UNIVERSE
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