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Rochsub2009 -> RE: how to write add (8/23/2013 6:42:55 AM)
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ORIGINAL: sml53
i would love some advice on my add.been on here for a while ,sent out letters of interest nobody seems interested or responds back????
As others have mentioned, you already asked this question. There's no need to create a second thread asking the same question.
But since you asked again, here's my advice; rewrite your profile. I don't know if you read my comment in your first thread, but your profile has so many grammatical errors and misspelled words that I actually thought that English wasn't your native language. If you are a native English speaker, then you need to fix the many errors in your profile (e.g. sentences should begin with capital letters). IMO, your profile sounds like it was written by one of those Nigerian scammers.
If a reader takes the time to decipher your writing, they'll quickly discover that your profile tells us almost nothing about you. You say in your journal that you have "a lot to offer", but you never say what that entails. Why not describe what you have to offer? Do you know how to give a great massage? Are you a skilled landscaper? Are you local and willing to make yourself available on short notice? Do you have a huge penis? Do you have a huge bank account?
Do you see the problem? You're asking the ladies to respond to you, even though you've given them nothing to respond to. You're going to have to work harder to sell yourself.
Think of yourself as a job applicant (you're applying for the job of sub or slave), and think of your profile as your resume. Now go back and look at your profile and ask yourself, "would this resume get me hired?" (BTW, the answer is "no").
I hope that helps. Good luck to you.
-Roch
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