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NMSilverFox -> Payment In Full (part one) (11/16/2004 3:06:26 PM)

Chapter one.

“The purchase”

Things were getting desperate. There he sat. Broke, and utterly alone. His house nearing foreclosure. Finding work in this economy that could even hope to flush him out was impossible. Having been forced to declare bankruptcy months before insured that he would eventually lose his home. John had been racking his brain to figure out some way not to get kicked out. Then he had the idea. The idea that changed his life.

Signing on the internet he placed some ads in certain websites and newsgroups catering to those interested in female domination.

"Single male facing foreclosure seeks Matron." Was the title
He stated his situation frankly put his email address in the posting and sat back to surf for a while. John went through his usual routine. Looking for work via the newspaper on the web. After about three hours of finding nothing worthwhile he found he had an email.

It only had one line. "I may have the answer to your problems. If you are serious. Email your phone number to me now."

John checked the email address the note came from and it was a non-descript web address. He thought on this for a bit and decided to respond. In the reply he gave his full name along with his phone number. Clicking send gave him a bit of apprehension. He figured it was probably some surfing snert and eventually put it out of his mind. And went to take a shower.

Just as he stepped out of the shower his phone rang. "Hello?"
The voice on the other end was not at all what he expected.

"What are you wearing John?" The feminine voice on the other end was inquisitive yet somehow demanding.

"Umm pardon? Who is this?"

"I am the person you sent your name and phone number to. Now answer my question please."

"Uhhh, Ok. What the hell.... To be honest I'm not wearing anything at the moment. In fact I just got out of the shower."

"Good. Now tell me your address."
"Who is this?"
"I may be your brightest day. As well as your darkest night. Give me your address or this call is over." The finality in her voice had him. He gave the stranger on the phone his address and heard a click on the other end."

"Hello?..”Answered by silence he hung up the phone and proceeded to find something to eat. His mind played with the possibilities of the event. John wondered who this woman was. He had just finished breakfast when the doorbell rang.

John put some sweat pants on. (he spent much of his alone time at home in the nude.) And answered the door.

Before him stood a lovely woman of about 45 years. She was professionally dressed and carried a briefcase. "Hello John. We spoke on the phone a bit ago. Aren't you going to invite me in?"

Her demeanor was at the same time sexy, professional and authoritive. He had no choice at this point but to let the woman in. Once he had closed the door she put down her briefcase and slapped his face hard. "Take off your pants and kneel. NOW!" A moments hesitation brought another slap. This time even harder. The steel gaze from this unknown woman brought him to heel. Nervously he stripped off his sweats and knelt before this stranger.

The woman scanned his body with the look of one who was inspecting potential property. "That's better." She said with a smile as she looked at his swelling crotch. Her demeanor was suddenly soft and somewhat seductive as she patted his head and ran her fingers through his hair. "I realize that the one thing you want to know right now is who I am and what I want. For now you will simply address me as Goddess. Everything else will be revealed if you behave yourself." The woman opened her briefcase and pulled out a collar and a lock. She dropped them on the floor in front of him and grasped his hair with her fist pulling his head back. Her eyes bored into his with a determination that was palpable “This is the point of no return John. If you put that on we will continue. If not I will leave now and you will likely lose everything."

With their eyes locked and John still naked and on his knees he reached down and picked up the collar. Placing it around his neck he fastened the lock and sighed softly.

The mystery woman placed a leash on the collar and revealed a set of double locking handcuffs from her case. She moved behind him quickly and locked his hands behind his back. Then she pulled up on the leash as if to direct a dog to obey. "Show me your home now John." Was all she said.

Nervously, John rose and began the tour. It took about an hour to show the woman everything in the home. She not only made notes but checked out all of his personal effects as well. She had him open every drawer and closet. He felt very strange with all of this but acquiesced to her demands. With every small revelation of his life she made a note. Finally she led him to the living room and sat at his kitchen table opening her briefcase. Placing papers and files in an organized manner on the table. "Do you have coffee John?"

"Yes Goddess, May I make you some?"
"Please. Black with two sugars is fine" She removed his handcuffs and slapped his ass to signal he could go make coffee. Then turned to her paperwork as if he wasn't even there. When he returned he noticed that all the other chairs at the table had been pushed away. He handed her the coffee which she sipped approvingly. "Very good coffee. I must say I'm impressed. You may sit on the floor as we talk. Please make yourself comfortable." The smirk on her face gave him a reason to smile at the small joke and he sat on the floor with his legs crossed.

My name is Antonia Justice. I must say I was very surprised by your initial posting as I have been looking for exactly this situation. You seek redemption from your situation yes?"

"Yes Goddess I do."
"According to your email you are quite desperate. I can see you are almost destitute. If we can come to terms here I think you will find I am the solution to your problems. Please read these contracts." She handed him a file of papers and a pen from the desk. John read over them. Each one defining both the nature of their relationship as well as the turning over of his assets to this woman in their entirety. It finished with the power of attorney.

As he read she spoke matter of factly. "If you decide to sign, Everything you own will belong to me. In fact John so will you. You will be allowed to remain in your home. But as my property you will bring the house up to speed and add features that I determine are appropriate. And you also will be agreeing to obey me without question is that fully understood?"

"Ye... Yes Goddess. This is all very clear. John stammered as he went over the papers.

"Well? What is your decision?"

John appraised the strange woman and slowly picked up the pen. His desperation had driven him to this. He knew that if he didn’t sign he had no hope of redemption. John placed his signature on each paper and handed the file to Antonia with obvious resignation.

After she placed the completed file in her briefcase. Antonia smiled at John. For the first time since their strange meeting began John found himself utterly captivated by her gaze.

"Now. Tell me slave. When was the last time you had an orgasm?"

The question, combined with the term slave gave John a bit of a start as he answered. "It's been two days since my last orgasm Goddess." There, on his knees he felt something like a supplicant giving confession to a priest.

Antonia pressed a button on her key chain. "Put your pants on and go out to my car. Open the trunk. You will see a case in the trunk. Bring it to me now slave."

John rose and put his sweats back on. Returning with the box he placed it unopened on the table. "As my slave you will always be nude when inside." She cast him a commanding glance and he responded properly. Antonia placed her hand on his hip. Indicating clearly that he turn around. "Hands behind your back." He felt the cuffs lock again on his wrists. This time somewhat tighter than before. "Now I realize this is quite new for you so I will give you some help with any possibility of refusal. Open your mouth slave." John hesitated at the command and was rewarded with a sharp slap to his face and a demanding glare. "DO IT NOW BITCH!" John slowly opened his mouth which she filled with a black rubber ball gag attached to a head harness. When he heard a lock click closed in the back he realized there was no ability to open or close his mouth at all.

Antonia brought forth a leather body harness with a ring for the genitals. This was fitted and adjusted to a very tight fit about his shoulders body and crotch. She then produced a metal cuff from the box he had brought in. The cuff was attached to a curved metal tube extending out and down from the lock. Antonia grasped his now hard penis and frowned. "We just can’t have this John. You are way too excited right now. Here let me help you." Antonia forced him across the room and bent him over the back of his couch binding his legs to the feet. John felt her grasp his member from behind and cover it with oil with her hands. Furthering his excitement. The first strike on his ass sent him into a grunt and a sharp shudder. The second strike brought a muffled scream. "This will end when you are soft slave. It's entirely up to you how long this continues." The third strike came even harder than the first two. Causing him again to scream and buck in obvious anguish. Antonia continued the thrashing of his bottom for 10 more strokes until she saw his erection subside from the pain. Antonia unbound one leg and spun him about with his back against the couch. Deftly installing the metal chastity device. John heard the cuff ratchet closed around the root of his genitals. Antonia pressed the cuff as tightly as she could. Almost cutting off his circulation. "Does that hurt slave?" Her question had some small note of concern.

John nodded in reply. "Very good." Antonia’s smile had a mirthful sadistic quality to it as she observed her captive. She moved to free his captive ankles and forced him to kneel with his knees spread on the floor. The sole of her foot pressed against his neck forcing his head to the floor. "Now that the preliminaries have been taken care of I will tell you how you will live from now on. First of all you now exist solely for my pleasure. Whenever I arrive you will assume this exact position. No matter what you are doing at the time. Should you displease me in any manner whatsoever, proper punishment will be exacted at my discretion. Get used to the chastity cuff. It won't be easy for you at first. I promise. However should you complain you will be gagged and punished is that clear?"
"John could only nod." Antonia grasped him again firmly by the hair. "Where are your keys" She demanded.

John motioned with his head to the coffee table where the keys lay
"Does anyone else have a key?" Antonia picked up his house keys and put them in her briefcase.
He shook his head under her potent stare
"Good. Now I am going down town to take care of this little business situation. While I'm gone I want you to thoroughly clean my house from top to bottom. When I return, if I am not satisfied you will meet my wrath is that clear slave?"

John answered with a nod.

"You will find restraints in the box on the table. While I'm gone you will fit them to your bed. Then you will take the enema bag and clean yourself out. I want you ready when for anything when I return." Antonia took her keys and unlocked his handcuffs placing them in her purse. "I'm off slave. See you soon." Antonia kissed his cheek and for the first time the waft of her scent gave him a light swoon. "Either way John you're fucked. I think you'll find you made the right decision. Antonia locked the door behind her and drove off into the day. Leaving her new property to his assignments.




blushes4u -> RE: Payment In Full (part one) (11/16/2004 5:30:33 PM)

Oh yesss...ok this is awesome! Going now to second chapter ;)




TwistedTrouble -> RE: Payment In Full (part one) (11/16/2004 5:46:10 PM)

oh good good got to read the next hehe
Twisted




theroebabe -> RE: Payment In Full (part one) (11/16/2004 6:22:08 PM)



You have some fantasy telling ability.

Thanks for sharing!





rubytuesday -> RE: Payment In Full (part one) (11/18/2004 1:02:21 PM)

Love the story - now Im heading to the second one too - well done - ty for making me smile

ruby




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